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Garland of Tankas - Time and Memory

Written: December 09, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: John Anderson ******************* 1/ Clock ticks through cold nights shades aim long as the light fades— pages grow flimsy, the ink of forgotten names smudges dissolve in stillness. 2/ The rain of spring knows steps shod on the silky soil— sighs mirror orchids their fragrance widens for years festering yet ephemeral. 3/ Sun shines through summer Smiles of kids in the landscape— brilliant and boundless but even the dazzling fire fades in the quiet of dusk. Conclusion: 4/ Leaves shed in the fall a rustling thread each season— woven in tandem— time is the loom of our life fabric of recollection.
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Roper Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 2:29 PM
Sotto, great imagery in feelings in your seasonal string of Tankas, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Canerdy Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 8:22 PM
Sotto Poet, you have taken us smoothly through the seasons. Love the "loom" metaphor! Janice
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 5:45 PM
this string of Tankas has such a smooth flow and subtle connectivity. I especially liked: time is the loom of our life fabric of recollection.--could be in a greeting card or poster. Faving
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 1:22 AM
And so we go on a merry-go-round, the year begins again, and your imagery is, as usual, memorable. Best for a win.
Hind Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 6:10 PM
Beautiful series of Tankas- just beautiful!!
Rolland Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 3:51 PM
just love it, great talent for sentiments and music, thanks poet sotto
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Lovely! I’d love to see you shine through and into your poems. Dip your toe in. Make it personal. Hugs ~ Kim
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