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My darling, the sheer size of my love for you? Gargantuan. There isn't enough space... in my heart to contain it. Wholesale; the cost of just how much? Gargantuan. It's exceedingly expensive, you see; worth more than a billion! The litany of moments and memories shared with you? Gargantuan. They're much too numerous... to evaporate into nothingness. The mountain I'd climb to pluck a star out of the sky for you? Gargantuan. And I'd climb much higher, my love; I'd reach heaven! The dream that I'm dreaming, for you and me? Gargantuan. And I'd dream... forever and a day. The sea that I'm sailing to meet you at the other end? Gargantuan. I've sailed much too far... to turn back, so please, wait for me! Date written and posted: 01/06/2019

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Date: 6/28/2021 9:15:00 AM
Really enjoyed the creative parallelism and formatting of your poem Edward. And, love so wonderfully imagined. Congratulations on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/28/2021 11:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) It's always delightful to hear your feedback, my friend.
Date: 1/8/2019 10:40:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/8/2019 11:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-) Much appreciated
Date: 1/8/2019 5:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Edward, it sounds as if you have a gargantuan love in your heart. John
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/8/2019 11:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, John!:-) I appreciate the wonderful comments!

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