Garden's Glamour

Garden isn’t robbed
Of its glory and luster
My breeze of vision 
My thoughts, my dreams
A restorer of splendor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mohammed Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 11:51 PM
This one made me smile... Just visualizing it!!...Great!!...Love Diana
Yamin Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 12:19 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem. I am glad it made you smile. Regards
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 12:23 PM
- A poem written with caution and care ..... it's glamor! - Beautiful Mohammad! - Wish you a nice Easter. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Yamin Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 6:10 AM
Thanks Anne for your words of appreciation for my Tanka. You are so kind
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Enjoyed reading this afternoon.>I am glad that I chose this one to read today..The kiss of the sun for pardon...The song of birds for mirth..One is nearer to God in a garden ..Than any place else on earth..Written by : Dorothy Frances Gurney..I thought of this poem when I read your work..Sara
Yamin Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 5:39 AM
Thanks for your kind words about my Tanka. You are always generous with your praise
Wesley Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 9:05 PM
Our gardens in Canada are still under snow but soon they will awaken and your words will bring the vision to life. Lovely verse my friend.
Yamin Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 10:50 AM
Thanks for visiting my Tanka Elizabeth and for your heart-warming comments. You tell me that gardens in Canada are still enveloped in snow. I am sure soon the spring will visit, the flowers will blow and greenery return. All that is required is a little patience for the return of the melody and color. Love.
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 11:53 PM
this is even better. I really love this one!
Yamin Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 12:02 PM
Thanks Andrea. You are so kind
Jordan Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 1:12 PM
Beautiful. Nicely done. J
Yamin Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Thanks for appreciating my Tanka, Jack. You are very kind.
La France Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Very nice, constance
Yamin Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Thanks for your kind appreciation, CDH. I feel flattered. Love
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