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Written: April 05/5/2025 for contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose As she drinks nectar from a flower, sweetness from heaven falls like dew anointed with a gentle rain amidst sun showers she appears as if on cue Lifting her wings she lands on a Zinnia beneath a tinted sky of April blue flight of fancy fanning fast, fabulous marvel, she is beauty true on true **************** In the quiet mysteries of the garden, where early blooms intertwine in view time seemed shut down in deference to this serendipitous rendezvous As petals plump, provide peaceful rhapsody revealing what butterflies drew brushstrokes on natural broad canvas, mauder whims in nexus hue

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Date: 4/22/2025 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations Las! :)
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Date: 4/20/2025 5:03:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 4/16/2025 6:14:00 PM
Thankyou for finishing my poem dear poets. It was a pleasure reading your poem. A big congrats to all my ten winners. I'm proud of all of you !
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Date: 4/9/2025 8:26:00 AM
SP, amazing how all these things fall into place. You know I consider you a fantastic observer of life and teacher of esoteric words. I do appreciate that. I was wondering if you meant to use the word maunder as I could not find a definition of mauder. I take what you say very seriously and want to make certain I have a shot at understanding some of the complex thoughts you express. Anyway, hope you are well and full of joy on this day, where we all have a hope for happiness. Smiles!!
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Date: 4/8/2025 9:38:00 PM
By the phrase- 'serendipitous rendezvous' you have scored so much. Though time seems shut down, I wish to have a peep into that place where the butterfly is frolicking with flowers. Simply beautiful.
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Date: 4/6/2025 10:35:00 AM
Nice poem and picture
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Date: 4/5/2025 4:13:00 PM
Excellent add on to Vienna's words, she'll love it!
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/5/2025 4:48:00 PM
Two thumbs up!!
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Sotto Poet
Date: 4/5/2025 4:34:00 PM
Thank you for your nice words and the serendipitous request: smiles

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