Garden Treasure

The rhododendron is my state flower.
In nature its blossom is pink,
But horticulturists have made the bloom
Any color of which you can think.
I go to the garden store to buy one,
To plant in my garden at home.
I take much longer to choose my new plant
Than I do in writing this poem.
"It will grow very fast " the salesman said,
"And blossom in purple and red."

Written: April 18, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/17/2016 6:07:00 PM
Joyce, congrats on your " Last Line Prompt" SKAT
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Date: 6/2/2016 4:14:00 PM
cleverly written to the last line prompt, Joyce. flows like honey on toast. I enjoyed it and congrats on the placement. I liked the remark comparing the length of time it took to choose a rhododendrum and write the poem.
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Date: 6/1/2016 5:19:00 PM
Sounds like a floral chameleon... nice one Joyce!
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 6/1/2016 6:28:00 PM
Thank you David. Love, Joyce
Date: 6/1/2016 2:52:00 PM
Pretty poem! Congratulations, Joyce!
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Date: 6/1/2016 11:47:00 AM
Well done, Joyce, and a clever take on the theme. Congratulations on your win! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in the "Last Line Prompt - 2" contest! You deserve it :) - Hans
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Date: 6/1/2016 5:00:00 AM
Very well written, Joyce. Congrats on a fine win. ~karam~
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Date: 6/1/2016 4:40:00 AM
The last line reads as sardonic, a perfect reason to place your poem high in my contest, Joyce. Congratulations!
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 6/1/2016 10:48:00 AM
thank you Julia, for your lovely contest and my win. Love, joyce
Date: 5/20/2016 7:09:00 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
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Date: 5/19/2016 12:58:00 AM
Lovely moments of poetry in the poem ( with a curiosity : what happened then, in a suggestion of story molecules...)
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Date: 5/18/2016 11:29:00 PM
nice read Joyce, thanks
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Date: 5/18/2016 11:12:00 PM
Nicely put together, Joyce...enjoyed the read. Best regards! :) john
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