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Garden reality

Chewed stalks brown corn Skeleton dead heads of sunflowers rotten tomatoes and watermelons fruitless vines and weeds waist high Purple salvia blooms shine Orange Marigolds **ideas--------- blooms blown Weeds shown stalks bare Full hare scalp bare no hair flower power showers Sour pity hour Powdered sugar icing tower the sweet wower

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/16/2012 1:44:00 PM
There are plenty of gourds though and some pumpkins..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara
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Date: 9/13/2012 4:38:00 PM
a touch of reality with waning crops from drought and a garden waiting to resurrect .. great to see u Doris luv ..
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Date: 9/13/2012 7:01:00 AM
The lady with the "green fingers" and makes everything grow. A nice poem Doris. - Have a nice day. / / oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/9/2012 6:51:00 AM
hey Doris, this reminds me of footle poetry, interesting enjoyed.
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Date: 9/9/2012 2:02:00 AM
oh, this is another awesome write of yours my dear, Doris. I've almost missed it. My apology if I drop only now to give you an answer of your question when you read my poem, My Quiet Place. Yes, i live within the school premise and the room is offered for us free. It is so quiet here like now, Sunday. Not on Sat. because we've class here from Mon-Sat. ( whole day) All i can hear are the sounds of birds, squirrels and the wind coming from my electric fan. It so humid today. THANKS AGAIN! hug: LG
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Date: 9/7/2012 7:35:00 PM
A difficult garden to maintain...makes the heart heavy... Good versing. Cynthia
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Date: 9/7/2012 2:13:00 PM
lol, love this witty write, Doris : ) I've heard the song Highway to Hell, but, no, I've never heard Highway of Life. I hope your back is continuing to improve
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Date: 9/7/2012 10:13:00 AM
Doris,I love gardens.well written free verse.
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Date: 9/7/2012 9:36:00 AM
SO clever!! I love gardens in their fullness and in their decline. Your imagery sent my mind awhirl back to times when I could put my hands in the earth...
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