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I was inspired by EE Cummings to write in his style for this poem.

I one Fine- morning when the garden was misty- ethereal the beauty birds mellifluous brouhaha loud and donnybrook a gang came fluttering over the fence and canoodled the flowers sweetly when the day was infinite serenity the birds lilting and murmuring loud and donnybrook and buzzingbees were buzzing from jewel-toned and eye-catching blooms oh summer and the sun-kissed color-infused birdies loud and donnybrook II here there sweet butterflies breathtaking gamboling delicate wings always a-fluttering insects dilly-dally flip-flopping hummingbirds whirling a black cat licks his lips whiskers twitching sneaky shifty lissome fearless hunter sneak-a-sneak slithers woosh watch out hummingbirdie with your pretty wings fly away fast faster and faster for the cat is a hunter the cat hunts the cat quiet and deadly go dancing hummingbird hummingbird turning twirling spinning III raven hair-tangled girl gathering daisies pansies wildflowers And drip-dropping petunias in this sun-drenched garden stops to gongoozle and a butterfly drifts- upon the gathered-blooms ________________________ August 15, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Garden Rambling Copyright Protected, ID 16-818-665-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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