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Garden of Verse haiku



                                 Bloom, garden of verse

                              Poet Trees of golden leaves

                                     Muse, eternal bee

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Paghunda Zahid

August 2, 2025 at 11:21 AM

That's a brilliant write. I truly enjoyed reading it. Best wishes ..!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 31, 2025 at 8:56 PM

A fantastic, memorable poem, BJ! It's a fave for me. Best wishes. :)

Valsa George

July 31, 2025 at 8:55 PM

poetry, beauty and flowers - all woven into this beautiful haiku. As bees hum around blooms, the muse circles around poets.Well done dear B.J.

Kim Rodrigues

July 31, 2025 at 5:48 AM

Love the thought of that golden bee buzzing… Hugs ~ Kim

sara Etgen-Baker

July 27, 2025 at 5:43 PM

Oh, wow! I loved the metaphors within this lovely Haiku! How creative and imaginative. Well done...sending you hugs and light, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

July 25, 2025 at 10:36 AM

Loved the idea of giving meaning to each word. Excellent.

Rowena Velasco

July 23, 2025 at 6:41 AM

A beautifully compact haiku—rich with metaphor. The imagery of “Poet Trees” and “Muse, eternal bee” evokes a timeless harmony between inspiration and creation. A true celebration of poetic growth and blossoming imagination.