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Garden of Beauty

Bell-shaped English Bluebells Violet face of lilac landscape Charming tints of scarlet Exuberance of Maple Red Red, white, upright Tulips Preening of vibrant spring Whistling breath of wind Kisses swaying Daffodils Laden droplets refracting Gleam of rose-petal gems Bluebird’s pine-needle nest Home of blueish green eggs Crocus purple flowers Amethyst glory of jewels Scented Lilly of the Valley Blooming white charmers Rainbow colors of Hyacinth Jewels glinting window sills Spicy fragrant Dianthus Apex of prized decorum July 4, 2020 Placed 1st: Strand Completely New Poetry (5) Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 7/8/2020 6:54:00 PM
Oh my!!! I feel as though I am walking through a delightful array of flowers. Each petal touching my skin. This is beautiful in every way. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2020 6:21:00 AM
Thank you my friend--appreciate your delightful comments, Brandy.
Date: 7/7/2020 11:27:00 PM
A rainbow of charming couplets in a spring garden, Vijay. Congratulations on your top win! I enjoyed the stroll through your garden of images!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2020 6:20:00 AM
Much appreciate Sam--many thanks.
Date: 7/6/2020 9:59:00 PM
Visually entertaining, Vijay, articulate illumination that is well-deserving of 1st placement, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2020 6:20:00 AM
Thank you William--much appreciate.
Date: 7/6/2020 12:19:00 PM
love the imagery, Vijay--congrats on your 1st place win, buddy!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2020 6:20:00 AM
Much appreciate LJ--many thanks.
Date: 7/6/2020 10:14:00 AM
so pretty your spring garden flowers. Lovely beauties all. Congrats Vijay on your first place.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2020 6:19:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne--much appreciate.
Date: 7/6/2020 5:58:00 AM
Vijay I couldn’t be happier to be in the top wind with you my friend!;) congrats well deserved!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 11:57:00 AM
Vijay the honor is mind my friend!;)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/6/2020 7:24:00 AM
So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks. Honored to be in your company.
Date: 7/6/2020 4:22:00 AM
Vijay, so many colorful blooms. Feel fresh. Congrats. Mohan
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/6/2020 7:23:00 AM
Much appreciate, Mohan--many thanks.
Date: 7/5/2020 11:21:00 AM
A perfumed garden...This poem is full of aroma
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2020 11:24:00 AM
Many thanks my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 7/5/2020 12:42:00 AM
Wow.. Your garden is filled with the beauty of flowers.. Your lines are spreading their elegant fragrance.. Great write Vijay.. Good luck..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.
Date: 7/4/2020 8:22:00 PM
Fanastic imagery, my friend. A beauty!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2020 6:30:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 7/4/2020 10:34:00 AM
A rainbow of stunning verses that decorate the vaults of poetry my dearest friend, Vijay! Ecstatic imagery of parading flowers. Good luck!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 11:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 7/4/2020 9:38:00 AM
I'd have said this was written by someone with green fingers, well written Vijay. We have woods by us and every May we go and see the bluebells, beautiful flowers. Good luck Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Tom--much appreciate. As I said below the green thumb credit goes to my wife.
Date: 7/4/2020 9:00:00 AM
So many beautiful flowers, but your forgot my favorite, Dahlia... My garden has most of the flowers you mentioned.. A poem full of imagery, as always...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, SO..much appreciate your kind remarks. My wife is the garden expert in our family and she adores all plants and flowers. I asked her about Dahlia--she reminded me that we grew them in our very first garden in front of our very first house--that was a long long time ago--I am excusing myself for forgetting it.