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Good wishes for my enemy poetry contest by Anoucheka Gangabissoon

 

Like an ebony rose in a province of ivory and golden flowers, you poisoned each peaceful petal with your senseless scent of death. You were never just another floret. Was I a fool to sow your seed in hope your roots would grow strong, portraying saffron scarlet hues with an emerald stalk flourishing with verdant leaves in serene sapphire skies. When winds blew too boorishly, I held your supple sepal with bamboo hands, so your sunshine spirit would not perish to toxic storms from organic forces. I was willingly the earth to your foundations, but your breaths became too bitter, stinging in selfish stubborn sympathies, as wild weeds strangled your stalk. We could have nourished nectar with hungry insects in need of nurture, but your grudge left behind broken bridges with a trail of crumbling caterpillars seeking wings. Cuts from your thorns remain, ingrained as internal inflictions, but still I plant bulbs to bloom. To create an oasis of graceful charm, where blossoms of compassion softly soothe petals of pardon in a garden of a wounded soul. Forgiveness is a heavenly light. A radiant beacon illuminating through a canopy of trees, eradicating shadows of hatred you left behind like excessive weeds. A melody of redemption whispers in harmonious refrains breaking chains of regret with burdensome pains. To let go is like maturing buds releasing the grip of timeless hate, as my meadows are a symbol of a divine mantra only welcoming peace.

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Date: 1/18/2024 10:37:00 AM
Beautiful music and poem which now brought tears today. Congrats on your win in the contest. love phyl
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Date: 1/6/2024 2:44:00 PM
Back with hearty congrats on your well-deserved top win in this contest.
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Date: 1/4/2024 9:25:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Silent One. I think many of us can relate in one way or another as toxic people come in all forms and often, leave deep wounds in need of healing. I am faving this. May your journey lead to healing and peace. Here's to 2024 dear SO, I hope it is a year full of health, happiness, healing and joy for you <3
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Date: 1/4/2024 6:25:00 PM
"To let go is like maturing buds releasing the grip of timeless hate" - Beautifully said. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2024 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading this wonderful write/great ending. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Forgiveness is Not for them but for Us. Our garden of life is fill with hurt/pain that needs forgiveness. Love This One... Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 1/1/2024 2:15:00 AM
Grudges and un forgiveness are like weeds blocking out the light. Amongst the contrite heart lies the thorn of punishing relationships biting the one reaching out to till at its Wasted harvest. Trust and faith the fertilizer for fresh gowth.
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Date: 12/31/2023 9:23:00 AM
This is fantastic SO you say it all and more besides. hugs Shadow all the best for New Year
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Date: 12/31/2023 8:58:00 AM
Silent One, what a masterpiece of a poem on peace towards enemies. Bravo! A FAVE. My very best wishes for the contest with such a remarkable and worthy entry. Warmest wishes for the New Year. ~
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Date: 12/30/2023 7:06:00 PM
softly soothe petals of pardon, yes like you say my friend its in the letting go that the scent of pure forgiveness finally takes hold of us and saves us from eternal resentment. I love this, gl in the contest, as far as I'm concerned you already have won me over :)
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Date: 12/30/2023 4:32:00 PM
The toxicity you described in the first two voices was real and spot on...Your words about forgiveness are wise and powerful. Forgiveness is a 'melody of redemption.' The 'letting go' is almost miraculous. Am faving this one. Have a great weekend, Sara
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Date: 12/30/2023 2:00:00 PM
Forgiveness is the peace, the grace, the lasting traces of faith. Forgiveness comes in giant leaps and small, scuffing steps. But, it always heals the doubts within the heart who gives it, like your garden promises with its beauty, its light, its wonder. Love love love this sweet friend. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 12/30/2023 1:45:00 PM
I agree with Veej, that is your best line. Btw, love Secret Garden
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Date: 12/30/2023 1:04:00 PM
--Forgiveness is a heavenly light. A radiant beacon illuminating through a canopy of trees, eradicating shadows of hatred you left behind like excessive weed--- that sums it up for me, SO. Your metaphoric words splendidly deliver the essence of your theme, my friend.
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Date: 12/30/2023 12:30:00 PM
Lovely exquisite write enjoyable have a blessed new year.
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Date: 12/30/2023 12:08:00 PM
Dear SO, your poem made me feel really inspired. It's so beautiful that I can't even find the words to describe it. You wrote it really well and shared your feelings in a great way. When people get really mad and hold onto their angry feelings, it can be like a sickness that takes away all the good things in their life. People who let their hurt feelings turn into hate often have a hard time getting better or feeling happy again.
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Date: 12/30/2023 12:04:00 PM
Apt Imagery - but your grudge left behind broken bridges with a trail of crumbling caterpillars seeking wings...wow! Love the petals of pardon. Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/30/2023 10:42:00 AM
Those who let hatred stem from hurt feelings never seem to heal. Anger can be like a cancer stealing all that is good from your life. Well done my friend. Beautifully written and well expressed. God Bless and Happy New Year. JB
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Date: 12/30/2023 7:11:00 AM
Wow! This is so beautiful and so well woven about forgiveness for enemies. And how they sometimes forget what we do for them, how we held them when they were lost, i just posted a poem too on this subject and i can resonate with this too, in terms of real life enemies that i choose to forgive to heal and move on, like you’ve said here in the ending especially. Theres so many line here that truly left me in awe. And i hear not anger but melancholy through your well articulated lines in such eloq
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Date: 12/30/2023 7:14:00 AM
Eloquence. I especially love the opening lines and also “ Was I a fool to sow your seed in hope your roots would grow strong,“ i know this feeling so well, and we often question, are we fools.. well i think it isnt that its just us being us, seeing the good in all and helping them. “ but your grudge left behind broken bridges with a trail of crumbling caterpillars seeking wings.“ whoa what a powerful way to describe the consequences of their actions. “ as my meadows are a symbol of a divine mantra only welcoming peace.“ impeccable ending! This is the best ive read for this prompt and im truly impressed by the flow and depth and your use of metaphors and alliterations to convey your thoughts on this theme. Flawless write! Pleasure reading this really. A fave it is for me. Best wishes for the contest

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