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Good wishes for my enemy poetry contest by Anoucheka Gangabissoon

 

Garden of a Wounded Soul

Like an ebony rose in a province 
of ivory and golden flowers,
you poisoned each peaceful petal
with your senseless scent of death.

You were never just another floret.
Was I a fool to sow your seed in
hope your roots would grow strong,
portraying saffron scarlet hues with
an emerald stalk flourishing with
verdant leaves in serene sapphire skies.

When winds blew too boorishly,
I held your supple sepal with bamboo hands,
so your sunshine spirit would not perish
to toxic storms from organic forces.
I was willingly the earth to your foundations,
but your breaths became too bitter,
stinging in selfish stubborn sympathies,
as wild weeds strangled your stalk.

We could have nourished nectar with
hungry insects in need of nurture,
but your grudge left behind
broken bridges with a trail of
crumbling caterpillars seeking wings.

Cuts from your thorns remain,
ingrained as internal inflictions,
but still I plant bulbs to bloom.
To create an oasis of graceful charm,
where blossoms of compassion
softly soothe petals of pardon
in a garden of a wounded soul.

Forgiveness is a heavenly light.
A radiant beacon illuminating
through a canopy of trees,
eradicating shadows of hatred you 
left behind like excessive weeds.

A melody of redemption whispers in
harmonious refrains breaking chains
of regret with burdensome pains.
To let go is like maturing buds
releasing the grip of timeless hate,
as my meadows are a symbol of a
divine mantra only welcoming peace.
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Babcock Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Beautiful music and poem which now brought tears today. Congrats on your win in the contest. love phyl
Poet Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Back with hearty congrats on your well-deserved top win in this contest.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 9:25 PM
This is a beautiful poem Silent One. I think many of us can relate in one way or another as toxic people come in all forms and often, leave deep wounds in need of healing. I am faving this. May your journey lead to healing and peace. Here's to 2024 dear SO, I hope it is a year full of health, happiness, healing and joy for you <3
Alex Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 6:25 PM
"To let go is like maturing buds releasing the grip of timeless hate" - Beautifully said. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I enjoyed reading this wonderful write/great ending. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Forgiveness is Not for them but for Us. Our garden of life is fill with hurt/pain that needs forgiveness. Love This One... Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Herrick Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 2:15 AM
Grudges and un forgiveness are like weeds blocking out the light. Amongst the contrite heart lies the thorn of punishing relationships biting the one reaching out to till at its Wasted harvest. Trust and faith the fertilizer for fresh gowth.
Hamilton Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 9:23 AM
This is fantastic SO you say it all and more besides. hugs Shadow all the best for New Year
Elliott Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Silent One, what a masterpiece of a poem on peace towards enemies. Bravo! A FAVE. My very best wishes for the contest with such a remarkable and worthy entry. Warmest wishes for the New Year. ~
Rose  Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 7:06 PM
softly soothe petals of pardon, yes like you say my friend its in the letting go that the scent of pure forgiveness finally takes hold of us and saves us from eternal resentment. I love this, gl in the contest, as far as I'm concerned you already have won me over :)
Mcintosh Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Forgiveness is the peace, the grace, the lasting traces of faith. Forgiveness comes in giant leaps and small, scuffing steps. But, it always heals the doubts within the heart who gives it, like your garden promises with its beauty, its light, its wonder. Love love love this sweet friend. God bless you, Love, Gina
Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 1:04 PM
--Forgiveness is a heavenly light. A radiant beacon illuminating through a canopy of trees, eradicating shadows of hatred you left behind like excessive weed--- that sums it up for me, SO. Your metaphoric words splendidly deliver the essence of your theme, my friend.
Nicholsen Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Lovely exquisite write enjoyable have a blessed new year.
Poet Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 12:08 PM
Dear SO, your poem made me feel really inspired. It's so beautiful that I can't even find the words to describe it. You wrote it really well and shared your feelings in a great way. When people get really mad and hold onto their angry feelings, it can be like a sickness that takes away all the good things in their life. People who let their hurt feelings turn into hate often have a hard time getting better or feeling happy again.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Apt Imagery - but your grudge left behind broken bridges with a trail of crumbling caterpillars seeking wings...wow! Love the petals of pardon. Happy New Year!
Ball Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Those who let hatred stem from hurt feelings never seem to heal. Anger can be like a cancer stealing all that is good from your life. Well done my friend. Beautifully written and well expressed. God Bless and Happy New Year. JB
Empress Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Wow! This is so beautiful and so well woven about forgiveness for enemies. And how they sometimes forget what we do for them, how we held them when they were lost, i just posted a poem too on this subject and i can resonate with this too, in terms of real life enemies that i choose to forgive to heal and move on, like you’ve said here in the ending especially. Theres so many line here that truly left me in awe. And i hear not anger but melancholy through your well articulated lines in such eloq
Empress Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Eloquence. I especially love the opening lines and also “ Was I a fool to sow your seed in hope your roots would grow strong,“ i know this feeling so well, and we often question, are we fools.. well i think it isnt that its just us being us, seeing the good in all and helping them. “ but your grudge left behind broken bridges with a trail of crumbling caterpillars seeking wings.“ whoa what a powerful way to describe the consequences of their actions. “ as my meadows are a symbol of a divine mantra only welcoming peace.“ impeccable ending! This is the best ive read for this prompt and im truly impressed by the flow and depth and your use of metaphors and alliterations to convey your thoughts on this theme. Flawless write! Pleasure reading this really. A fave it is for me. Best wishes for the contest
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