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Garden Death

 
Garden
Lovely, exquisite
Budding, growing, creeping
All sweet Summer and into the Fall
Fading, shrinking, dwindling
Sorrowful,  forlorn 
Death


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October 10, 2016

Poetry/Diamonte/Garden Death
Copyright Protected, ID 16-837-053-10-10
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Diamonte
sponsor, J. Thompson

Seventh Place

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John Michaels Date: 4/8/2017 4:52:00 AM I don't see many Diamontes on here - was one of the first forms I tried when I got into poetry. A lovely example; congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/23/2016 12:50:00 PM A garden full of life then gone with Winter. Great diamonte! Congrats! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/22/2016 2:40:00 PM It is sad to see the end of the season with the beauty going, going gone..Enjoyed reading your work again..Congrats on being in the winners' list..Sara Login to Reply

Anna-Marie Docherty Date: 10/12/2016 5:35:00 AM Beautifully done... so sad at seasons end but captured beautifully! Great diamante form! Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/11/2016 5:18:00 PM Well done - so effective! CayCay Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/11/2016 12:40:00 AM wow, Constance. It's a winner. I just know it!!! And I still can't get over how my story was so much like yours. Please let me know the title of your old poem. I wonder if I ever saw it!! Login to Reply

White Wolf Date: 10/10/2016 6:21:00 PM Well done!!! what comes from the Earth, returns. Said exquisitely. /|\ Login to Reply

White Sage Date: 10/10/2016 4:00:00 PM nice diamante and a sadly beautiful theme to go with. awesome write. best wishes Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/10/2016 2:57:00 PM Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..These are no so easy to write..I did some a long time ago and really enjoyed doing them..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/10/2016 1:59:00 PM Perfect for autumn Constance ! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 10/10/2016 1:40:00 PM A very beautiful piece that takes us through the gardening seasons Login to Reply