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Garden Death

Garden Lovely, exquisite Budding, growing, creeping All sweet Summer and into the Fall Fading, shrinking, dwindling Sorrowful, forlorn Death ______________________ October 10, 2016 Poetry/Diamonte/Garden Death Copyright Protected, ID 16-837-053-10-10 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Diamonte sponsor, J. Thompson Seventh Place

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Date: 4/8/2017 4:52:00 AM
I don't see many Diamontes on here - was one of the first forms I tried when I got into poetry. A lovely example; congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/23/2016 12:50:00 PM
A garden full of life then gone with Winter. Great diamonte! Congrats!
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Date: 10/22/2016 2:40:00 PM
It is sad to see the end of the season with the beauty going, going gone..Enjoyed reading your work again..Congrats on being in the winners' list..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2016 9:08:00 PM
Your poems are always very beautiful, Broken Wings. This is great diamante form. Beautifully focused on death. You are a young woman, think life. Congratulations on your placement and thanks for your entry.
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Date: 10/12/2016 5:35:00 AM
Beautifully done... so sad at seasons end but captured beautifully! Great diamante form!
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Date: 10/11/2016 5:18:00 PM
Well done - so effective! CayCay
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Date: 10/11/2016 12:40:00 AM
wow, Constance. It's a winner. I just know it!!! And I still can't get over how my story was so much like yours. Please let me know the title of your old poem. I wonder if I ever saw it!!
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Date: 10/10/2016 6:21:00 PM
Well done!!! what comes from the Earth, returns. Said exquisitely. /|\
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Date: 10/10/2016 4:00:00 PM
nice diamante and a sadly beautiful theme to go with. awesome write. best wishes
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Date: 10/10/2016 2:57:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..These are no so easy to write..I did some a long time ago and really enjoyed doing them..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2016 1:59:00 PM
Perfect for autumn Constance ! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2016 1:40:00 PM
A very beautiful piece that takes us through the gardening seasons
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