Garden

GARDEN
Derived from a purity unknown
A natural resource, a source not shown
We derive from truth
From the tree of the fruit
We have been brought up since youth
To be flowers of the real, to not throw stones
 to stay connected to our roots
Somewhere we became weeds 
smothering and choking vine 
A garden over grown
Somehow down the line
Our complaints turned mute
Our muscles abandoned our bones
Our soil hasn’t the minerals to feed
We are kept separate, forced to be all alone.
We bloom in the shade
We are wilted brown from green.
We stopped seeking the unknown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Horn Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 8:53 PM
I detect some dissension among the ranks as they say in the military. Something has happened. An introduction to poems would help out to pave the way. Jim Horn
Thornton Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Are you for real?
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:24 AM
Deep visual but a good way to make your poem filled with the title traits! Excellent!`~Olive Eloisa
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 10:42 AM
lavish in images, joel.. very well done!.. hugggs
Thornton Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Thanks so much.. ::Hugs back ::
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