Garden

Since the first time you came to my life
all my pain simply disappeared
in the Garden of Love .... butterflies
celebrating your smile

All the troubles that hurt me before
made me lose my faith in love
then you kissed me and made me change my mind
the whole world took your name Rose!

In the Garden of Love
we touched our souls
now to me it has become
my Garden of Rose!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/28/2012 9:35:00 PM
Carlos, i love the inspirational way you display love,, I suppose some times meeting a new person, can ease a damaged heart. Your poem is very beautiful, I found my soul-mate,, now, i need to find the feel of this beautiful garden you painted in my mind... love your rhyme and verse... always~LINDA
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Seth C Mongrut
Date: 8/28/2012 10:24:00 PM
She dances in the Garden of Love, she gives her name to everything around but especially to his heart! Thank you Linda! :)
Date: 8/28/2012 4:17:00 AM
lovely write..thanks for sharing your beautiful garden:) SK
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Seth C Mongrut
Date: 8/28/2012 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Sukmawati! :)
Date: 8/27/2012 9:22:00 PM
Totally romantic Carlos..simply lovely x
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Seth C Mongrut
Date: 8/27/2012 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Tracie! :)
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