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Dramatize The Desires Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Ink Empress. Used in poem: Hold me in your heart. Date written: 05/13/2026

Gaping Mouth of Desire


my mouth agape, 
salivating...
and I mean, a waterfall of saliva, 
c   a   s   c   a   d   i   n   g!

oh, this pining, this unslakable hunger...

I need you, now, 
more than I've ever needed anything, my sweet.
I'm eagerly anticipating "soon,"
which seems as far as thousands of miles.

you promised it,
so I'm holding onto it

do you hold me in your heart just as much?

every time our front door shuts -
behind you -
our world, life as we know it, 
slices down the middle.

our home becomes a vast, lifeless desert;
the silence, deafening.
loneliness isn't just a feeling,
but an encumberance I can't shake off.

please, be back soon;
I need you now.
I miss your silhouette dancing on the walls.

i'm with emptiness;
she's a houseguest that refuses to leave,
tracking mud and grit across the floor.
I'm tired of going 
from room to room
scrubbing her footprints off the hardwood,
out of the rugs; 
I have no use for her!

is it a sin that I want just your tracks?

I am but a lone wolf
howling at the moon that is you at twilight time.
please, just come back
and end my torturous yearning.

need I repeat?
I need you back, soon,
please?
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Miller Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 7:52 AM
Wow Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 7:48 PM
Thank you very much for the visit, Terry:-)
Empress Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 6:17 AM
Whoa, dear EI, im impressed and in awe of how you can write on any theme and prompt just effortlessly! I love so many lines here especially loved "our home becomes a vast, lifeless desert; the silence, deafening. loneliness isn't just a feeling, but an encumbrance I can't shake off." So moving and touching! Soulful poem this is! Thank you for supporting my contest and for sharing this: pleasure reading this. Congratulations! Sending you light always
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 7:16 AM
Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful feedback and congratulations, Inky:-) You've made my day, my friend.
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