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From the eyes of a child Like the rise of the Nile Are brown rivers of soul and bold green chemistry. Disobedient despite being scold Never believing they'll get old Creating cliques of tribal frenemy New shoes Nikes or Tims painted white worthy of slim boy girl fight Running on black street growing ice cold Fearless as the bullets fall Silver gun tossed or lost Like grey asphalt rose From the eyes of a child Once celebrated but not now For cops and robbers no longer a game Puberty is a dark cloud Hanging stranger fruit found Adults who train them never to blame. 6/19/2022

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Date: 10/16/2023 12:54:00 PM
powerful, bold, sadly beautiful, the fragility of innocence - thank you for sharing
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 1:02:00 PM
I appreciate you reading and making a kind comment Mat!
Date: 9/26/2023 11:55:00 AM
Strange fruit and gangs two bad things. Chicago, ViceLords or Deciples. Almost the former but went to college instead.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/26/2023 12:57:00 PM
Interesting. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12/15/2022 12:42:00 PM
wow, you said a lot with this poem. A very sad plight in our world that you showed well with your poem.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/15/2022 4:51:00 PM
Yes. Gun control is needed but still the youth have access often due to adults either knowingly or more often unknowingly. Thanks for reading Andrea.
Date: 6/27/2022 1:43:00 AM
Well i'll deal with your reply to Evelyn below first, being i am 79 and nearly there. Life can be hard work if one lets it. But it is still worth the effort, if only to read wonderful poetry, this one Karen is excellent, an insight for me and i'm sure many readers. Keep writing the sentiment is real, that i do like...Harry
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/27/2022 3:33:00 PM
What a treasure you are Harry. I admire your work and am flattered you read my poem. I am 54 and can not imagine what this world will be like when I am 80! God bless you for your wonderful support of all soup poets.
Date: 6/20/2022 7:10:00 AM
Your insight on this sad subject is remarkable, very well said Karen, very well! Have a nice day!
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/20/2022 9:58:00 AM
You are kind to comment. Thanks and have a nice day as well.
Date: 6/19/2022 5:30:00 PM
Interesting angle on a deadly life-choice. :) gw
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/19/2022 5:35:00 PM
Thanks for reading
Date: 6/19/2022 10:40:00 AM
The sad reality of troubled youths who become involved in gangs, is eloquently conveyed in moving verse. Best wishes, Evelyn
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/19/2022 10:55:00 AM
I appreciate your comment and wonder what will become of our world once I am 80?

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