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she plays scenarios in her head till she can’t distinguish shades from fact or fiction it started out all innocent at first she didn’t sense the danger she let her thoughts play drift and skip ahead of herself like an untended garden the weeds soon taking over she spirals down a private rabbit hole and plays such games not meant for children the type with hidden consequences like mental variations of russian roulette she’s gone offtrack caught in a cycle she’s really lost her way it’s gone too far i see her deteriorating and i can’t save her it breaks my heart to see her fear and mental anguish that's sadly now her cross to bear

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Date: 8/2/2025 4:08:00 AM
poignant, evocative words. Hard to watch someone mentally deteriorate. Nicely penned
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2025 5:35:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sara ~

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