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~Down in the "Big Easy" playing cards in a house of chance,  
she’ll lay you down a losing hand, with her bluffed romance. 
Her cards have many faces, but few can win her hand, 
and a hard hand bet can break a heart; you'd better understand...

    When you play the cards in New Orleans, 
    she cuts them with a knife,
    when you bet the house on a Cajun Queen, 
    you could lose your life.

I try to find an angle, she gives a little glance.
She deals down on the table with a little dance.
With an ace in the hole do I double-down or should I let it ride?
Her eyes will give away her edge; it's something she can’t hide...

    When you play the cards in New Orleans, 
    she cuts them with a knife,
    when you bet the house on a Cajun Queen, 
    you could lose your life.

She holds the Queen of Diamonds in the palm of her right hand,
and my ace’s heart is broken when she deals to another man.
She lays her card down easy, the winner stakes his claim.
But the winning hand doesn’t understand to her it’s just a game.

    When you play the cards in New Orleans, 
    she cuts them with a knife,
    when you bet the house on a Cajun Queen, 
    you could lose your life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/31/2025 6:10:00 AM
Hey Mark congratulations on 2nd place, It could have been 1st place but John pays more! lol. Hope you down loaded your song, if not, use the three dots by the audio, if you have any problems just soup mail me your email address and I will send you the file. Good job fun song.
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Mark Massey
Date: 7/31/2025 7:13:00 PM
Thanks Jerry, good to know John’s got deep pockets. His song turned out great as well. Great job.
Date: 7/30/2025 5:30:00 AM
Hey, great poem, Mark, I think I like Jerry's music production of this one better than mine! Congrats.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/30/2025 2:38:00 PM
We are almost neighbors, I live in Carrollton.
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Mark Massey
Date: 7/30/2025 1:49:00 PM
Hey John, I live in Fort Worth, near DFW airport.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/30/2025 10:56:00 AM
Hey, I'm a honky-tonk kind of Texan with New Orleans roots...
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Mark Massey
Date: 7/30/2025 9:46:00 AM
Thanks but I think yours is from the soul and tops the list…mine is for the honky-tonk crowd.
Date: 7/29/2025 7:40:00 PM
I get the vies of...gangsta's paradise! Best wishes and congratulations.
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Mark Massey
Date: 7/30/2025 4:41:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 7/11/2025 7:08:00 AM
Love to hear this put to music. Great song.
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Mark Massey
Date: 7/12/2025 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Keith
Date: 7/10/2025 12:26:00 PM
Great lyrics, Mark!
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Mark Massey
Date: 7/12/2025 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Kim

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