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Galaxy of Crystal

Galaxy of Crystal Reader of star stories – far flung destinies Enclosed within a midnight crystal dome Filled with flecks of leftover stardust Cosmic plane of star-crossed constellations And dust storms of the lost transcendent light - Clearly sees through falling astral luminaries And hopes tossed up for the first twilight star; A gypsy crossing galaxies of interstellar legend – A woman with starry vision clad in nebula silk Woven from threads of spiraling chambers - Knocks at a door with no handle Star princess – celestial royalty – spends the night Leaving bits of stray star clusters To enchant the eyes of a dream child At the stargate of the dusky etheral. Thank you Line for your inspiration. I missed the contest but your theme set me spinning into a celestial wonderland!

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Greg Gaul

Date: 10/9/2020 8:36:00 AM

The dream child's words are still sparkling.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/9/2020 2:38:00 AM

A celestial gem Sam, the night sky and universe never fails to enchant me. Congrats on your win. Over Fork Over Enjoy your weekend Tom

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/8/2020 6:16:00 PM

Is it a crime, to adore your free verse, as much as your rhyme..? :)) Sam, my imagination was set spinning into a celestial wonderland with you.. An exquisite artistic journey, my friend. Loved it! Congratulations for your excellent win! ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/9/2020 1:43:00 PM

Aww thank you, Sam. There’s nothing better than receiving an armload of starry blessings from an admired poetess whose also a wonderful friend! :)) Have a great weekend!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/9/2020 12:44:00 PM

I don't think I see the "rhyme patrol" anywhere! No crime to share a rhyme! Love it when we travel the galaxy together, celestial wonderland. Thank you my friend for your exquisite feedback. I feel so blessed by your words that come from your amazing talent! Makes my heart happy to know you loved this one. Grateful for your congratulations. Sending armloads of starry blessings!

V. Deepa

Date: 9/17/2020 11:41:00 AM

Woah.... excellent celestial imagery dear Sam mam...you made me float in the Wonderland..:-) I thoroughly enjoyed the flow of science terms .. Keep writing and keep inspiring..Mam. I believe your doing well.Take care. Much love :-)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:27:00 AM

Thank you, Deepa! Had fun weaving poetry and science together. Many thanks for coming with me into this celestial wonderland. Your gracious message encourages me. Sending back hugs and best wishes!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2020 3:15:00 PM

wow I bet this would have made her winners' list!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:23:00 AM

Many thanks and much gratitude for your encouraging, lovely message Andrea! Made my day! Sometimes my muse comes down with a serious case of procrastination while she thinks! I'm just happy that she finally pulled it together!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/14/2020 8:49:00 PM

As ethereal and inspiring as the night sky, and quite the intriguing title too!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:17:00 AM

I keep thinking about the galaxy under a crystal dome - how the atmosphere has a crystal clarity to it. Thank you for your lovely compliments. They encourage me. Hoping your air quality is better - not like dusty crystal! All the best.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/14/2020 8:14:00 PM

Your enchanting poem took me on a magical tour of the universe, with the aid of a gypsy. It's a fave for me. :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/21/2020 11:13:00 AM

Many thanks Evelyn - so honored by your fav. Your message gave me a much needed lift! There was something magical about Line's theme. It took me on the same mystical journey through the stars! Blessings to you my friend!