Galaxy Battle

Battle in a far 
Away galaxy
Good versus evil
An eternal fight
Duel with sable

Greed conquered an
Once good man heart
Surrending to 
The dark threshold

To get the 
Power that
Corrupted him

Leaving 
Behind

All

Nayda Ivette
1-1-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:42 PM
you did a mighty fine job with this challenge!! (oh wait, is this YOUR challenge?) I think it is!! In that case, this is a fantastic example poem!!
Negron Flores Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Thank you Andrea. This poem is an example for the contest.
La France Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Nayda, this is a great example for your contest, it will be the first time that I do this form, looking forward to it ~
Negron Flores Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Thank you Constance.
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