Galaxy Battle

Battle in a far Away galaxy Good versus evil An eternal fight Duel with sable Greed conquered an Once good man heart Surrending to The dark threshold To get the Power that Corrupted him Leaving Behind All Nayda Ivette 1-1-2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2016 6:42:00 PM

you did a mighty fine job with this challenge!! (oh wait, is this YOUR challenge?) I think it is!! In that case, this is a fantastic example poem!!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/3/2016 6:53:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. This poem is an example for the contest.

Constance La France

Date: 1/2/2016 7:53:00 AM

Nayda, this is a great example for your contest, it will be the first time that I do this form, looking forward to it ~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 1/2/2016 9:40:00 AM

Thank you Constance.