Galaxies, Memories and Relativity

Kinetic waves of energy Ripples in time and space subtle sums of synergy Patterns of silk and lace Universes that race away Mem’ries that as quickly fade… Into black holes of yesterday That give nothing back in trade Stardust settling ‘pon dusty hutch And on planetary plain (alike) Truly does not differ much In substance same (as in sight) Universes that to stars give birth Pediatric wards that work much the same Birth is birth…for what it’s worth It’s just a cosmic game Galaxies that go on forever Rainbows that have no end All a part of eternal endeavour Without an answer my friend Warp speed….Snail’s pace It’s all relative you see One takes place in outer space The other is given to you and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/25/2017 11:54:00 AM
I enjoyed this piece it mesmerizes and cast shadows of thoughts.
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Date: 1/14/2017 9:16:00 AM
I agree one hundred percent with the three previous comments made! This deep , absolutely enjoyable to read and a top notch creation my talented friend! Bravo!!!
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Date: 1/11/2017 11:44:00 AM
Really well done and the cosmic references are delightful.
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Date: 12/29/2016 12:13:00 AM
Bloody god, this is a brilliant poem man. Your lines and breaks are precise. I love this: "Mem’ries that as quickly fade… Into black holes of yesterday That give nothing back in trade"
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Date: 12/28/2016 4:38:00 PM
Heady stuff, David...And a damned enjoyable little read to boot! My best regards! :) john
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