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Galactic Warming

Galactic Warming By Desiree Espinoza Galactic times we live in today Galactic advances lend itself to practice ways Galactic issues must among the human race Are we tactic with these problems we face? Galactic days are here forever Lactating and spawning pollution and anticlimactic weather

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Skat A

Date: 9/15/2016 11:13:00 PM

Desiree, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2016 7:46:00 PM

Great first post, Desiree, ,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 9/15/2016 2:18:00 PM

I really liked how you ended this poem, Desiree. "Spawning pollution" is great allegory. Hope you keep sharing your poetry on Soup. Protest through poetry is a noble quest and ... almost a duty, in a way. Words are powerful things... they can inspire change.