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GALACTIC TRAVELS

Where should I zoom to, perhaps to the Moon, And on my way will juggle with millions of stars, I have whispered to a Comet passing by real soon, To please pick me up, as i plan to visit Mars. Most of all I want to feel the star dust on my face, And hear choirs of angels as they upon me gaze. My wish upon a star, To swim in the Milky Way, I long, to be in the Galaxy, I dream of such a day, I want to feel the sands Of Mars, run through my hands, Hope to see shooting stars, and also Meteoroids, But terrified to see a hurtling Asteroid, Wish to explore many other Galactic planets, Google, my best friend right from the start, Though neither of us sure of the stratosphere’s Patterns, so advised to be sure, to take with me a jacket.

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/5/2024 1:15:00 PM

Me too! Wouldn't it be fantastic?

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/4/2024 6:55:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, your thoughts are beautiful, magical and dreamy; all at the same time. How amazing it would be to, ' zoom to the moon.' My heart is smiling, my dear sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George

Date: 7/1/2024 5:21:00 AM

Man is always prone to exploration and travel as there is an innate curiosity to see what happens beyond our immediate surroundings. Space explorations are propelled by this endless curiosity. I enjoyed your scuttling from planet to planet and your desire to see the galaxy and the milky way. Your fear of facing a hurtling asteroid made me smile. On the wings of imagination, you can travel to any place cutting across space and time. When knowledge of intergalactic space and your imagination got combined, a beautiful poem is born.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2024 10:29:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun/cute "travel" write. I need a vacation. Can I go with you, Please??? Off this crazy earth just zoom us to the Moon. Hahaha!!! I wish you would write more... Have a fun day writing away...............

Deb M

Date: 6/23/2024 2:09:00 AM

Sounds like fun Jennifer….fun write! Debx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/22/2024 9:52:00 AM

Love the galactic trip and style of your work---- very engaging, jen... hope you are good!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/22/2024 2:15:00 PM

Nette, it seems that we are totally on the same wave length, or mental telepathy. I have just answered Sotto Poets most recent poem and said how I agree with your reply and then immediately came to check my latest write and see your comment to me. I am so happy that you answered me and will be visiting your page shortly. I have missed you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2024 1:02:00 PM

this is super cute. Or should I say SOUPER cute?

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2024 1:48:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, glad you thought it was SOUPER cute Hugs, blessings,. Jennifer

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/20/2024 10:51:00 AM

You'll need a super flying saucer, my friend. It would be a great tour of the galaxy.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/23/2024 1:52:00 AM

Absolutely, Ill make sure the flying saucer is big enough to take 6 of us as a few others would like to join this Galactic sight seeing tour, Hugs, blessings - Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2024 10:42:00 AM

A scifi high! Love your imaginative write! Fly far and wide,explore, enjoy! Hugs a plenty! :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/15/2024 5:19:00 PM

I love this Jennifer. I want to go on this trip too. A cosmos carnival to be enjoyed! A fav for me! :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/14/2024 11:07:00 PM

An enjoyable read Jennifer, space fascinates me, hope you and your family are keeping well. Tom

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/14/2024 7:19:00 PM

Dear Jennifer, if only we could zoom to the moon, if only to meet the man in the moon. If we could reach the stars, imagine the poems that’d come from memoirs. Love the poem! ~ Beryl

Silent One

Date: 6/14/2024 12:14:00 PM

Hello my friend this is great imagination and your poem beautifully captures the human desire to explore and connect with the universe. It blends scientific curiosity with poetic imagination, creating a compelling narrative of interstellar adventure. The juxtaposition of wonder and caution, fantasy and reality, enriches the poem, making it resonate on both an intellectual and emotional level.