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G O D - Revison

Given the altruistic nature

Of righteous believers, their asservation that God exists

Dwindles not; it is axiomatic, for all creation is proof that it persists.


April 11, 2018 for Robert Haigh's  Triple A Challenge - 14 lines Maximum
(I can't believe I left one of the words out the first time!)

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2018

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Carole Duet Date: 5/4/2018 8:41:00 PM A delightful little poem with a great message, Andrea. I know it's upsetting to have left one of the required words out but it's a very good poem nevertheless. Look at me: I didn't leave any of the words out and still didn't place...but honestly, I couldn't care less. Login to Reply

Laura Hay Date: 4/25/2018 7:53:00 AM Very clever Andrea, perfect that you have place one of the words for each line of the poem. Warm regards, Laura. Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 4/14/2018 8:36:00 AM I like short succinct writes like this Andrea. It is full of meaning and exacting word choices. I thought about writing for this contest, but not much comes to mind lately. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/14/2018 7:17:00 AM Very, very nice! GL for a win! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 4/12/2018 4:43:00 PM Cleverly done, Andrea. Some things are taken for granted, thus no need for supportive evidence, but for those who need persuading, there is enough proof to whet their appetite. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 4/12/2018 9:14:00 AM Are we not all created in his image? love the theme///Miss you Andrea. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/12/2018 6:36:00 AM It is axiomatic that you have aced this contest..cleverly executed, Andrea. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/12/2018 5:32:00 AM wow Andrea you did an awesome job for the contest, good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 4/11/2018 9:08:00 PM Well done, Andrea. GL on contest. Login to Reply