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G O D - Revison

Given the altruistic nature Of righteous believers, their asservation that God exists Dwindles not; it is axiomatic, for all creation is proof that it persists. April 11, 2018 for Robert Haigh's Triple A Challenge - 14 lines Maximum (I can't believe I left one of the words out the first time!)

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Carole Duet

Date: 5/4/2018 8:41:00 PM

A delightful little poem with a great message, Andrea. I know it's upsetting to have left one of the required words out but it's a very good poem nevertheless. Look at me: I didn't leave any of the words out and still didn't place...but honestly, I couldn't care less.

Laura Hay

Date: 4/25/2018 7:53:00 AM

Very clever Andrea, perfect that you have place one of the words for each line of the poem. Warm regards, Laura.

James Inman

Date: 4/14/2018 8:36:00 AM

I like short succinct writes like this Andrea. It is full of meaning and exacting word choices. I thought about writing for this contest, but not much comes to mind lately.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/14/2018 7:17:00 AM

Very, very nice! GL for a win!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2018 4:43:00 PM

Cleverly done, Andrea. Some things are taken for granted, thus no need for supportive evidence, but for those who need persuading, there is enough proof to whet their appetite. Regards // paul