G2G

I've been running low on sympathy, leaning on a new perspective
The stiffness in my neck from viewing the world sideways, studying the selection

Neglection of time, spreading through the false notion of stillness
The end is painted on the walls and we are destined to be the illness

War in laughter, throwing rocks and hiding hands with grins sowed onto faces
Killing each other for the prize when we don't know what the race is

Passing judgment and sending him to his death
The consciousness lost, because of his experience

Two sinners, two killers, waiting for their fate
We are so quick to question the love and accept the hate

Authenticity is lost in the sea of forgery, with the desperation to be great
We are so quick to sell ourselves to get a sliver of that taste

Neglection of time, so you live in the moment
Neglection of faith, so you cannot focus

Coming down from that high, you are left to reminisce 
And for some odd reason, you start to miss

The knowledge of the Word that lives inside every human wanting to thrive 
Do you not realize?

You can drown in your sins and say that you can swim
But your breath is cut short by your own consciousness

Your hunger for wealth is suddenly starved
When you tilt your head back and thank the stars

To the people in the world dying for a loan
Never forget that this is not your home

The riches, the egos, are killing this world 
The odds are cut slim when you don't have a cure

It angers the sinners, does not make a difference
They hate that the Word is worth more than millions

Your world can be full, yet still feel so hollow



who am I to tell you what to follow?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 2/11/2025 12:50:00 AM
This would be a fantastic song when put to music! The rhythm and rhyme are really well done. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/9/2025 7:54:00 PM
amazing write. congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers
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Date: 2/9/2025 7:51:00 PM
Powerful piece.
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Date: 1/20/2025 7:08:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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