Future

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into future blind achieve structure with desires promising outcome As my heart’s desire lies alongside me slumbering of a welcoming history of what the unfolding future will usher we walk into it embracing future promises 5/10/2016

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Becca Teagan

Date: 5/12/2016 5:33:00 PM

Nice, Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 5/12/2016 7:38:00 PM

Thank you. Hope your doing ok and staying out of the sun as much as you can. Hugs

Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/12/2016 1:44:00 PM

Hi Eve, an excellent Haiku Eve. Definitely a seven and a fave my friend. Your words sing. Hugs....Mike. XX

Eve Roper
Date: 5/12/2016 2:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mike, I didn't win on this, but your compliment and your 7 and fav. that is all I need. Thank you again. Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/12/2016 1:42:00 AM

This is lovely and wise Eve. I am so happy to tell you, your book arrived today! I have just begun to read it. I will try to leave a review for you when I am finished. Hugs, Connie xxoo

Eve Roper
Date: 5/12/2016 2:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie, you have made my day. I hope you enjoy. Hugs Eve :)