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Future

into future blind
achieve structure with desires
promising outcome


As my heart’s desire  lies alongside me
 
slumbering  of a welcoming history 

of what  the unfolding future will  usher

we walk into it embracing  future promises

5/10/2016

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Becca Teagan Date: 5/12/2016 5:33:00 PM Nice, Eve! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/12/2016 7:38:00 PM Thank you. Hope your doing ok and staying out of the sun as much as you can. Hugs

Vladislav Raven Date: 5/12/2016 1:44:00 PM Hi Eve, an excellent Haiku Eve. Definitely a seven and a fave my friend. Your words sing. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/12/2016 2:31:00 PM Thank you so much, Mike, I didn't win on this, but your compliment and your 7 and fav. that is all I need. Thank you again. Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/12/2016 1:42:00 AM This is lovely and wise Eve. I am so happy to tell you, your book arrived today! I have just begun to read it. I will try to leave a review for you when I am finished. Hugs, Connie xxoo Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/12/2016 2:29:00 PM Thank you so much, Connie, you have made my day. I hope you enjoy. Hugs Eve :)

Tom Quigley Date: 5/11/2016 9:52:00 AM Inspiring write! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/12/2016 2:32:00 PM Thank you so very much, Tom. Hugs

Jan Allison Date: 5/11/2016 2:51:00 AM Great haiku - and I love the lines underneath too :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7 Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/10/2016 8:12:00 PM You did a very nice job, Eve. I am not all that optimistic of America's future any more, but we still have to have hope!!! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/10/2016 7:12:00 PM Creative work..I enjoyed reading it today..Sara Login to Reply