Future

I stood on the cliff and asked the wafting clouds exultantly,
"You greet me every morn, you watch me through 
My windows and peer through the chinks,
You have been a mystical part of me through 
My childhood when I skipped and jumped with friends
And through my confusion and confidence in adulthood.
What does the future behold for a dreamy me?"

The sky seemed bluer in the cloudscape and I heard echoes
" In the labyrinth of choices your future is sown in........your future is sown in
Your cherished dream was an unbelievable reality................believable reality
A kaleidoscopic ride after the nature you've churned out for self..........for self
An investment in optimism has enveloped you in calmaria..............in calmaria
Enjoy the fruit which is multiplying with interests......................with interests".


May14, 2015
For Skat A
Any Poem You Are Proud of # 3

(May 10, 2016
For Nayda Ivette Negron)

*Calmaria (Spanish)- after a storm comes calm
Poem is in a dialogue form; the second verse is an end line word poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/24/2016 8:57:00 AM
Congrats Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/24/2016 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 5/23/2016 12:36:00 AM
Balveen, Congratulations and thank you for sharing a poem you are proud of. Stop by my latest blog "Innocent of All" and enjoy the warm smile. :) **SKAT**
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Date: 5/23/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 5/13/2016 2:44:00 AM
Balveen, congrats on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/23/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 5/12/2016 1:30:00 AM
Interesting form you chose for this write, you put it all together perfectly
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/12/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thanks! I'm just lead by my inclinations, Brian.
Date: 5/11/2016 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations Balveen on the placement of the contest
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/12/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Nayda!
Date: 5/10/2016 12:58:00 PM
Amazing write, Balveen. Brilliantly expressed, the simultaneous frightening, and wonderful nature of the future. With the whispering repetition, this one really does pull you into the scene atop the cliff... (FAV'd)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/10/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thank you ever so much Michael!
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