Future

Far off in a distant time Under an azure sky, so sublime, There will be love and peace. Unequalness will have ceased. Righteous leaders lead united lands. Earth evolved into God's plan.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2016 2:45:00 AM

Jean, congrats on your win. ~LINDA~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 5/11/2016 1:28:00 PM

Congratulations Jean on the placement of the contest

Jean Murray
Date: 5/11/2016 3:52:00 PM

Thank you Nayda. I think this is my third placement in your contests. This of course means you are now one of my favourites!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2016 7:12:00 PM

oh I wish I was optimistic enough to believe this. But it's a beautiful dream, indeed. (ceased) is the word!

Jean Murray
Date: 5/8/2016 4:58:00 AM

You know Andrea, I knew there was something not right with caesed but could not figure it out. Just now, on responding to a comment by Silent One, I wrote weird twice as wierd.I am certain there must be a name on my condition. At least you didn't have to say.."Grease is the word".