Future

Future Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Before time was created lived an hourglass draining of sand, the sand sank and there came the desire for true destinies, Before the approaching set of tomorrow’s held hand, came a grasp of the powerful fate of subsequent necessities. Shouldn’t we all see our dreams when we look into the mirror? Does the mirror give us insight into our upcoming fortune? Shouldn’t we take chances without luck to make life clearer? Life depends on the forthcoming of harmony and attune. We all should feel destinations when our eyes close at night, And the certainty of our dreams will help us wake in the morning, If only the world knew the difference between wrong and right, Maybe the sadness of yesterdays wouldn’t arrive with no warning. We are fated to live this life full of joyous love and gratitude, Without these three things the earth would not be used for good, Seek out kindness with a touch of grace and not suffering platitude, For we cannot build a hot-flamed fire without any solid wood. My soul holds beliefs that good deeds bring a better tomorrow, I sure wish we could all hold hands connected by a loving suture, Let’s leave the past where it is without any regret or sorrow, And be filled with the inspiration of a brilliant future. Date Written: May 6, 2016
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Devnath  Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Chansarkar Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Optimistic and inspirational Luloo!
Smith Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations Luloo...
Scars Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:32 AM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Davey Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 1:14 AM
Congrats on your win in this contest Laura, well deserved
Scars Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:31 AM
thank you Brian :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura!
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 8:17 PM
many thanks Eve :)-luloo
Rv Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 3:29 PM
This is amazing!! Congratulations on your marvellous win!! :) :)
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 5:46 PM
thank you Sneha :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Very inspirational and well-written, Luloo. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 2:06 PM
thank you sweet lady! right back atcha'! -luloo:)
Negron Flores Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 1:34 PM
many thanks Nayda, yet another wonderful contest! have a blessed afternoon:)-luloo
Godwin Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 11:01 PM
Well done - loved reading this beautiful poem. I'm sure it will do well - I'm sure it already has! CayCay
Scars Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 10:36 AM
thank you Cay Cay, sweet lady :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 8:12 PM
this was so lovely, and I think that you, Laura, are a true example of someone who lives this way, with so much love and gratitude!!
Scars Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 10:21 PM
Awww thank you Andrea you made me smile as I am having a rough night. It's the little things you do and say that makes a big difference...:)-luloo
Nance Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Power of your positivity radiates in your writes. So many motivational lines, "Shouldn't we all see our dreams when we look into the mirror?" yes we should. well written Laura ;)
Scars Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 8:09 PM
awww thank you very much Casarah (I think I've told you this before, if I did, I apologize but I think your name is beautiful) :)-luloo
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