Notes About The Poem

Fussy Cat



   Cat stirs
        Then purrs

   Yawns, sighs
        Makes cries

   M e o w
        Wants chow

   Seeks dish
        No fish

   Dried food
        Bad mood

   Eyes stare
        With glare

   Stands still
        To chill

   No win
        Gives in

   At last
        Eats fast

   Next scene
        Dish clean


April 2, 2015

~1st Place~
Contest: All Yours (Jun 14)
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 06/14/ 2021

~10th Place~
Premiere Contest: 2019 Marathon Mile #26
Sponsor: Mark Toney
Judged: 03/24/2019

~1st Place~
Contest: Put Your Footle Out Your Mouth
Sponsor: James Edward Lee Sr.
Judged: 04/02/2018

~1st Place~
Contest: Your Footle Poem
Sponsor: Judy Konos
Judged 04/07/2015
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Toney Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Sandra, excellent Footle Series! This is the only Footle that has placed in the last 26 Poetry Marathon contests! Congratulations on your win on Mile 26 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 1 contest to go before the final! ~Mark
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 10:31 PM
Thank you so much, Mark! I thought I'd go with something light and cute, and am pleased that I made your winner's list. It doesn't seem possible that there's only one mile left before the final! Sandra :)
Callus Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 4:20 PM
This is a very good string of Footles, Sandra. Congratulations on your win, though I would have placed it higher! Regards // paul
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Paul, for your very positive comment and congrats! I am pleased that you enjoyed the Footle...it was a fun write. Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:59 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra, excellent footle. Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Thank you, Eve! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Fabulous string of footles Sandra, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Thank you, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:40 AM
That about wraps it up. Well done, Sandra, and congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Thanks, Line. A fun write for sure! Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 12:32 AM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 11:02 PM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win with a nice footle.
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Thanks so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Cozart Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 2:53 PM
This is very clever!
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Thank you, Dale! It was such a fun write, and I am a cat lover, so that made it even more fun. Glad you enjoyed it. Sandra
Duet Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 8:00 PM
Hi Sandra! This is so clever and entertaining...especially to a cat lover who knows what it is to have a "fussy cat".
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Hi Carole, so pleased that you enjoyed it, and I am pleased you are a cat lover! I appreciate your visit and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
Gazbowski Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 4:32 PM
An excellent write Sandra, this bounced along with effortless ease.
Buhain-Baello Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 5:00 AM
An excellent footle, lovely cat too.
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 7:37 PM
:)
A   Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA
Haight Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Hi Linda, that was a fun one to work on! Thank you so much for your congrats! Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 10:48 PM
oh yes,I remember these. Congrats on your win!! I love all things CAT
Haight Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Thanks, Andrea! We share our love for cats! Although, I do not have one at my home now. But one of my daughters close by has a 20 lb Tuxedo cat that we can hold as a baby, and he is awesome! :) Hugs, Sandra
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations Sandra.. :)! cute footles.. :)!hugs!//olive eloisa
Haight Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Thank you so much, Olive. I appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Well done Sandra. Congratulations on your first place win.
Haight Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Oh, Brenda! Glad to see you are back on PS! Missed you, friend! Thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 6:59 PM
Congrautlations on your win and a 7. Blessings Eve
Haight Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Hi Eve, thank you once again for your congratulations and support. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 11:47 AM
I loved this one first time I read it Sandra - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I so much appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Haight Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thank you, Sara, so pleased that you like it! Thank you for stopping by. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Sandra, wonderful footles for the contest and because I know cats, this poem rings verrrry real to life, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry
Haight Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings, for your nice comment and support. Yes, I have had cats many years, so the poem came from experience! Thank you for stopping by. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 12:19 AM
great job. I fear I did it wrong. I have never used footles to tell stories, I just do them the original way, making a joke with the titles of them. HOpe I can make some time to try it out this way!!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Kit Kat puss fat. Sorry couldn't resist. These ate cute!
Haight Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 10:17 AM
so psyched you liked !!!
Yvonne Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 10:01 AM
This is just excellent Sandra! You've been able to turn a Footle poem into verse that tells a clear concise story poetically.
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 4:29 PM
I had a fussy cat at one time....you can read my reply to Tammy below about where my inspiration came for this one! This form is really a lot of fun! Thank you for your encouraging comment! Sandra
Pinet Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 10:34 AM
This is very good showing the reader a glimpse of your talent with words. Emile.
Haight Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Hi Emile, I am pleased that you like it. It certainly is a fun form to work with. Thank you so much for your kind comment. Sandra
Reams Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 9:02 AM
This is so cute Sandra! I love the picture with the poem. I have to read this one to my sister she has a cat that fits this theme.
Haight Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Thank you, Tammy, I appreciate your nice comments. We had a cat, that we adored, but he would only eat cooked liver! And, we gave in--he lived to be 20! The memory of that kind of inspired me for this poem! Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra
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