James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Fuse With Spring

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                       See us
                   her in pastel
                     flowering
    and the long strands of her hair
                     from the
          gentle breeze of Spring
                      dancing

                      See us
                   as we frolic
           under the soft touch of
                  Spring's sun

                      See us
              as we fix our eyes
                 to each other
             while Spring's rain
             tenderly cools our
                   excitable 
                      flesh

                     See us
                   fuse with
                     Spring

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 19, 2011 at 5:16 AM Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul James. Love, Carol

Daver Austin April 21, 2011 at 3:12 PM A delicious spring fantasy, Sir James. There is nothing like being hit by those warm spring rain drops after an absolutely horrendous winter. Love, daver

James Foulk April 7, 2011 at 12:38 PM enjoyed this piece of creative poetry. thank you for reading The Old Train Depot and for your comment

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 7, 2011 at 9:10 AM My Maiden Voyage is posted .. first kiss luv poem for contest James.. maiden voyage..first kiss.. sound OK to u luv? James Peranteau June 2, 2021 at 11:24 PM It sounds great dear poet...Uv course u knew that would indulge me when....heck, more so now...lol much love, James...never to late to say ty dear Linda...please read my last post and share with our friends here, I think they all gave me up for expired az our beloved Daver uv yore.....much love, james

Caroline Cécile Delacroix April 4, 2011 at 11:08 PM Awesome write! Spring is definitely here and you captured it well. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Stephen Parker April 4, 2011 at 6:03 PM I like how you twine nature and human intent. Nature is an ally of human fealty.

Debbie Guzzi April 4, 2011 at 3:10 PM boy I wish it would get to New England brrrrrrr Light & Love

C.C Bloomsfield April 4, 2011 at 2:57 PM So very beautiful!hope Noah is fine and you too dear poet.

Carolyn Devonshire April 4, 2011 at 2:56 PM James, I sent you a regular email (not Soup mail). Please let me know if you don't receive it. Important info to share with my friends. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 12:42 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more James. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 4, 2011 at 12:28 PM Lilting and lovely lines compsed here James my friend.. a special write alluding to luv and mixed with Spring sensations luv.. seeing myself in your lines ... seeing u with pen and paper in hand under a lovely tree writing poetry .. awesome as always u amaze me luv.. James Peranteau June 2, 2021 at 11:26 PM *u fluster mine cerebral

Carolyn Devonshire April 4, 2011 at 9:47 AM There is something about spring that evokes passion and romance. You have captured it beautifully in your poem, James. Wish you and I could dance beneath the sun together. Thanks for your ind words on Daniel. Love, Carolyn