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Fuse With Spring

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                       See us
                   her in pastel
                     flowering
    and the long strands of her hair
                     from the
          gentle breeze of Spring
                      dancing

                      See us
                   as we frolic
           under the soft touch of
                  Spring's sun

                      See us
              as we fix our eyes
                 to each other
             while Spring's rain
             tenderly cools our
                   excitable 
                      flesh

                     See us
                   fuse with
                     Spring

Copyright © James Peranteau | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/19/2011 5:16:00 AM Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul James. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/21/2011 3:12:00 PM A delicious spring fantasy, Sir James. There is nothing like being hit by those warm spring rain drops after an absolutely horrendous winter. Love, daver Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/7/2011 12:38:00 PM enjoyed this piece of creative poetry. thank you for reading The Old Train Depot and for your comment Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/7/2011 9:10:00 AM My Maiden Voyage is posted .. first kiss luv poem for contest James.. maiden voyage..first kiss.. sound OK to u luv? Login to Reply James Peranteau Date: 6/2/2021 11:24:00 PM It sounds great dear poet...Uv course u knew that would indulge me when....heck, more so now...lol much love, James...never to late to say ty dear Linda...please read my last post and share with our friends here, I think they all gave me up for expired az our beloved Daver uv yore.....much love, james

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 4/4/2011 11:08:00 PM Awesome write! Spring is definitely here and you captured it well. Thanks for sharing. Caroline. Login to Reply

Stephen Parker Date: 4/4/2011 6:03:00 PM I like how you twine nature and human intent. Nature is an ally of human fealty. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/4/2011 3:10:00 PM boy I wish it would get to New England brrrrrrr Light & Love Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 4/4/2011 2:57:00 PM So very beautiful!hope Noah is fine and you too dear poet. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/4/2011 2:56:00 PM James, I sent you a regular email (not Soup mail). Please let me know if you don't receive it. Important info to share with my friends. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/4/2011 12:42:00 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more James. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/4/2011 12:28:00 PM Lilting and lovely lines compsed here James my friend.. a special write alluding to luv and mixed with Spring sensations luv.. seeing myself in your lines ... seeing u with pen and paper in hand under a lovely tree writing poetry .. awesome as always u amaze me luv.. Login to Reply James Peranteau Date: 6/2/2021 11:26:00 PM *u fluster mine cerebral

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/4/2011 9:47:00 AM There is something about spring that evokes passion and romance. You have captured it beautifully in your poem, James. Wish you and I could dance beneath the sun together. Thanks for your ind words on Daniel. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply