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Furthermost Gravity

Lost my equilibrium amidst an utterly ethereal seduction, ascending glinted stratospheres 'tween reciprocally magnetic forces, beyond constellations' obscure vapors, whilst breathlessly infatuated moons softly whispered destinies' avowal to surrender otherworldly ventured sighs... I want to be the impetus furthermost your gravity... CONTEST 225 - sponsored by Brian Strand inspired by Sara Bareilles "Gravity"

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/17/2016 8:41:00 PM

A real good venture into my environ, Paloma. The space imagery was spot on. I always was a lover of science/fiction since I was a little boy. Science or space themes enthrall me. You know your way around the cosmos, you speak the lingo well. A good space-based love poem is always a good take-out to dine on. Ty for sharing. Many blessings to you, dear lady.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/14/2016 6:06:00 AM

Creative as always Paloma. I'll see your Furthermost Gravity and raise you a pair of Anti-gravity boots! LOL! Nice share! MC P.S. Soup mail...

Paloma P
Date: 10/14/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thanks MC, yep send those over so I can add them to my boot collection! :) Muchas gracias, got it.

Chris Green

Date: 10/12/2016 8:46:00 AM

Love does seem to have that pull on our hearts and often it is stronger than anything in the universe. This was hypnotically beautiful Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 10/12/2016 9:36:00 AM

Oh hypnotically, you do give good review Chris. :) I'm so pleased you like it, this one gave me so much grief...