Fureal

Fureal

Real people are as rare as an oasis after a sand storm in a desert.

Still, I prevail on my life’s quest for the precious, admirable, honorable few who live by their own high moral Que.  

Those aberrant, atypical, anomalous humans to whom perhaps I might relate to.

May clean water never be as arduous a challenge to find,
as are people who walk the talk, speak the truth and are kind.

Ruff, buzz, bleat, bleep, Roar!  Hiss, purr, coo,
do you kool humans have secret lingo??  I need to surround myself with the likes of you!


									Sunshine Williams

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/1/2016 8:07:00 AM

Great poetic expressions enveloping mind blowing lines. You've maintained your standard of impressing sound minds and I am definitely one of those you've wowed. Great work friend

Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/3/2016 3:20:00 PM

Funom, I love your sound mind and your sweet comments, :), jill

Francis Osho

Date: 1/30/2016 10:47:00 PM

i like it jill. how did u describe me so well. ha ha haa

Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/3/2016 3:17:00 PM

Thanks Francis, I've got that ESPN!

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/15/2016 3:03:00 PM

The answers in life are seldom found neatly labeled and packaged for mass consumption, only through investigation, cooperation and participation are they revealed. A closed mind is in a state of inactivity and awaits death as its final release. Very well written. Emile. #7

Jill Spagnola
Date: 1/17/2016 3:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Emile, you are gracious...peace, jill

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2016 9:14:00 AM

I think that when we take time to look closer, we will find the real within each person. It is the seeing that leads to the believing. I had a teacher that took the time to truly see me when no one else could see anything of value. Now I try to see and often I am tremendously surprised and thankful for the people I am blessed to spend time with.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 1/15/2016 1:32:00 PM

Richard, I believe it is a beautiful thing to find the good in others and learn others value as well :), jill

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/11/2016 11:15:00 PM

I myself haven't met anyone from the high moral cast you mentioned, Jill. It would be impossible. Only one who walked this earth can be categorized as such, and He now sits at the right side of the Father's throne. We strive though, and we don't forget to be compassionate. hugs!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 1/15/2016 1:27:00 PM

Kim you are lovely, but I agree to disagree. I believe you have that you have interpreted my piece rather narrowly. :), jill

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/11/2016 10:21:00 PM

well another like me....there will never be....I am so mentally free....because I Accept Him Faithfully....just try me, you will see....Love it jill....;)

Jill Spagnola
Date: 1/15/2016 1:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Eric. And I am pretty sure there are no others like we...humans are like snowflakes, each different in their own way. Thank God for diversity :), jill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2016 5:30:00 PM

this is KOOL. I think it all depends on what we are looking for. if you search for someone with high marks in every single time, it's gonna be a very long search!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 1/15/2016 1:20:00 PM

True that Andrea, I have had this once before, so I know these people exist. It is certainly not perfection I seek (cause I sure ain't perfect), and I have the rest of my life:)..like I said, I have had this symbiotic match before, so perhaps I have had this blessing which some others never attain...I think you are KOOl!