Funny One

Sexually Gamble nookie bookie Hangover in the Suburb alcoholic bucolic Just trying something different

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2012 7:30:00 PM

Interesting footles..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2011 6:18:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Patrick. Wishing you a beautiful weekend full of joy. Love, Carol

Grace Williams

Date: 12/8/2011 7:52:00 PM

That is always a good idea. I have never seen a poem like this before (phrases like these have been part of larger poems I have seen, but they have never stood on their own) and it is really interesting. I like the second idea better to be honest, but it is good that you have two of them, so that the rythm pattern is displayed.