Funny One

Sexually Gamble
nookie
bookie
Hangover in the Suburb
alcoholic 
bucolic



Just trying something different
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Interesting footles..Sara
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Patrick. Wishing you a beautiful weekend full of joy. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 7:52 PM
That is always a good idea. I have never seen a poem like this before (phrases like these have been part of larger poems I have seen, but they have never stood on their own) and it is really interesting. I like the second idea better to be honest, but it is good that you have two of them, so that the rythm pattern is displayed.
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