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Funny Now, Foolish Then

One bright fine day this girl lay stunned don't stray off paths. Not the right way fast the sway down and yea for trees. I had to pray in wet clay climb while gay birds sang. _________________________ February 13, 2016 Poetry/Than-Bulk/Funny Now, Foolish Then Copyright Protected, ID 16-756-394-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Than-Bauk, sponsor, Marugu Mo Third Place

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Date: 3/16/2016 7:38:00 AM
Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 3/16/2016 8:52:00 AM
Sara, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment and congrats...
Date: 3/15/2016 5:46:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2016 6:32:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congrats, appreciate !
Date: 3/11/2016 12:48:00 PM
LOL! wonderful imagery. Hugs, Bobby
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 6:39:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting with the wonderful and hugs !
Date: 3/11/2016 7:48:00 AM
Hi Constance, in this fun poem you do seem just like me. I am a disaster waiting to happen, anytime, anyplace. I really enjoyed this one. As i say, so like me, i shall place it in my faves for each time i read it i may remember some of my own moments. A seven for the fun element and the memories stirred....MIKE.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2016 6:40:00 PM
Mike thanks for the nice comment, the fav and the 7 ~
Date: 2/14/2016 5:11:00 PM
Interesting write, BW. Is this figurative or did you actually take a fall. Mono-rhyme between the stanzas. Well done.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2016 9:19:00 AM
James, it was a stupid thing to do and my pride was hurt, I was covered in clay and leaves, walked home, undressed, put my nightie on and crawled into bed crying ...
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James Inman
Date: 2/15/2016 5:25:00 AM
You poor thing, hope you didn't hurt yourself. the things we do for good photo.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 1:00:00 AM
James, thanks for the well done, this actually happened, I was trying to get a photo of the river raging by and slipped on the wet ground and down I tumbled, hanging on to trees to break the fall, happy to not lose the camera... climbed back up the hill and ended up with dirt all over me ~