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Funny Now, Foolish Then

 
One bright fine day
this girl lay stunned
don't stray off paths.

Not the right way
fast the sway down
and yea for trees.

I had to pray
in wet clay climb
while gay birds sang.

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February 13, 2016

Poetry/Than-Bulk/Funny Now, Foolish Then
Copyright Protected, ID 16-756-394-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, Than-Bauk,
sponsor, Marugu Mo

Third Place

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2016 7:38:00 AM Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/16/2016 8:52:00 AM Sara, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment and congrats...

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/15/2016 5:46:00 PM Broken, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/15/2016 6:32:00 PM Linda, thanks for the congrats, appreciate !

Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 3/11/2016 12:48:00 PM LOL! wonderful imagery. Hugs, Bobby Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/11/2016 6:39:00 PM Bobby, thanks for visiting with the wonderful and hugs !

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/11/2016 7:48:00 AM Hi Constance, in this fun poem you do seem just like me. I am a disaster waiting to happen, anytime, anyplace. I really enjoyed this one. As i say, so like me, i shall place it in my faves for each time i read it i may remember some of my own moments. A seven for the fun element and the memories stirred....MIKE. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/11/2016 6:40:00 PM Mike thanks for the nice comment, the fav and the 7 ~

James Inman Date: 2/14/2016 5:11:00 PM Interesting write, BW. Is this figurative or did you actually take a fall. Mono-rhyme between the stanzas. Well done. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 2/17/2016 9:19:00 AM James, it was a stupid thing to do and my pride was hurt, I was covered in clay and leaves, walked home, undressed, put my nightie on and crawled into bed crying ... James Inman Date: 2/15/2016 5:25:00 AM You poor thing, hope you didn't hurt yourself. the things we do for good photo. Constance La France Date: 2/15/2016 1:00:00 AM James, thanks for the well done, this actually happened, I was trying to get a photo of the river raging by and slipped on the wet ground and down I tumbled, hanging on to trees to break the fall, happy to not lose the camera... climbed back up the hill and ended up with dirt all over me ~