Funny Mismatch

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For Dodoitsu Contest

Written 2/5/2015

She's too short and he's too tall When they kiss, their braces mix Hard to untangle, twisting Smiling, they giggle. Written on 2/5/2015

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Vincent Flannery

Date: 2/7/2015 7:24:00 AM

Nice entry Laura. It reminds of those teenage years. I see a nice little connection with the kiss and braces and how it does entangle one. Good luck and have a nice weekend.

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/7/2015 10:06:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comment, Vincent. I didn't even see that entanglement connection until you mentioned it! :)

Adell Foster

Date: 2/6/2015 10:55:00 PM

I love the humor displayed within this wonderfully written Dodoitsu. It made this reader giggle. Thank you Laura for sharing such a fine read ;-) Good Luck in the contest. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/6/2015 11:25:00 PM

Thanks very much, Adell! I'm glad you got a giggle out of it, lol! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/5/2015 8:12:00 PM

ah true love! best of luck in the contest! Light & love

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/5/2015 8:26:00 PM

Thanks, Debbie! Sometimes it's fun to dwell on the humorous side of love! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/5/2015 6:15:00 PM

A cute dodoitsu, Laura! Best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/5/2015 6:24:00 PM

Thanks, Rhonda! My idea came from the fact that my tall son married a very short girl. They are just darling together! :)