Funny Mismatch

She's too short and he's too tall
When they kiss, their braces mix
Hard to untangle, twisting
Smiling, they giggle.




Written on 2/5/2015

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Vincent Flannery

February 7, 2015 at 7:24 AM

Nice entry Laura. It reminds of those teenage years. I see a nice little connection with the kiss and braces and how it does entangle one. Good luck and have a nice weekend.

Laura Leiser

February 7, 2015 at 10:06 AM

Thanks for your kind comment, Vincent. I didn't even see that entanglement connection until you mentioned it! :)

Adell Foster

February 6, 2015 at 10:55 PM

I love the humor displayed within this wonderfully written Dodoitsu. It made this reader giggle. Thank you Laura for sharing such a fine read ;-) Good Luck in the contest. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Laura Leiser

February 6, 2015 at 11:25 PM

Thanks very much, Adell! I'm glad you got a giggle out of it, lol! :)