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Funeral Cortege Sans Protocol-Contest

Funeral Cortege Sans Protocol The autumnal equinox period Spells time for worship, pilgrimages Rituals and a pandemonium Of festivities and gay hyperactivities The elephant godhead idol Over decked, anointed With all fervour is immersed In its watery bed amidst chantings Its worshipped form Turns to formlessness The formless deities rise at dawn Bleating like sacrificial lambs Leaving a trail of dismembered limbs On shores like the carnage of pilgrims Heaped on one another in Mecca After the great crane's death knell A convoy of trucks arrive to pile The mutilated aftermath of their godly images Littered unwanted on the golden sands Sweep the once worshipped but Now shredded and tattered earth's burden On their slow funeral cortege sans protocol SECOND Balveen Cheema November 11, 2015 Contest: Dark Poetry Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 12/6/2015 9:27:00 PM
Very powerful and vivid imagery really brought these sad events to life... An interesting poem, Balveen. Very well written! Congrats on a great win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 6:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for your praises!
Date: 11/16/2015 9:15:00 PM
Hi Balveen, congratulations on your sweet dark win. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 5:21:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 11/16/2015 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 5:21:00 AM
Thanks Nayda!
Date: 10/19/2015 10:56:00 PM
So sad you wrote here. It will do well Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/20/2015 12:31:00 AM
Michael, should it not be for the Dark & Twisted? I had been very disturbed after seeing the images of these two incidents and had penned down the similarities.
Date: 10/19/2015 12:51:00 PM
really really very deep and sad imagery Balveen - good luck in the contest
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/19/2015 9:13:00 PM
Thanks Jan! The images of crane deaths and mutilated remains of the idols on the shore seem the same!

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