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Funeral

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The mocking is shocking
Aunty Mavis stopped rocking
Then mourners were flocking
A cavalcade blocking
The streets of South Dorking 
Rumours and talking
Like vultures out squawking
Proportionate baulking 
Reputation ignoring
So boring, I'm snoring
The eulogy diction
Precise in it's fiction
The perfect life stitched on
Close the sale, get the pitch done
Now the coffin is sliding
The red curtain slow gliding 
Velvet box soon residing
On a mantle piece hiding
It's a travesty clearly
Distant relatives merely
Hanging round for a number 
Pass the bread and cucumber
Social etiquette blunder 
Now poor Mave is asunder 
The circus is closing
Uncle Sid is left dozing
With sandwiches curling
The world keeps on whirling
Lesson learned: be a spender
Be a builder, defender
A love fight contender
Not reciever, but sender
All that thrift doesn't render
A relationship mender
Remember, remember
God decides where to send ya
When it's goodnight Vienna

Sam Scott
24th September 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/24/2023 7:47:00 AM
Funerals and eulogies…hmm, you have recreated the environment all too well. It’s similar to holiday dinners with distant relatives. Excellent!!
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Sam Scott
Date: 9/24/2023 7:54:00 AM
What a treat to hear from you Mark! I have been to enough such occasions (sadly) to have insight ;) as I am sure you have too. Thanks for dropping by!
Date: 9/24/2023 3:53:00 AM
Such profound truths, despite the melodious rhymes that left me rapping too along to these lines as i read, i understood and felt the depth of what you’ve conveyed. But few are those senders, and more are those receivers, and i love that coffin sliding line and the last lines what you’ve said there! What a reminder! This is lyrical write; fave for me. Goodluck for the contest sam! Love this
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Date: 9/24/2023 5:03:00 AM
You are a wonderful gift to this community. Thank you Ink x for offering such encouragement to us all and it means a great deal, hand on heart.
Date: 9/23/2023 9:32:00 PM
This is brilliant and engaging. I am sure you have a winner Sam! Good luck,
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Date: 9/23/2023 10:52:00 PM
Very kind, Karen :)

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