Functional Disorientation

At times, I let disorientation-exercise to be on the loose Allowing mind toward relaxation-muse Imagining bursting colors of varied hues Creating designs from beauty-clues Brightly transforming frustration blues. Awesome kaleidoscopic moment Grasped me in radiant engagement Beholding varied wonderment Bringing joyous amazement Midst functional “disorientation” involvement. When viewed at another perspective Disorientation means “You’re not attentive” And judged as missing directive Along efforts to stay fully active Against the convention considered distinctive. Admitting to be in a disoriented incident My heart accepts it not an accident Since it teaches me to become more prudent Knowing that those I hold tight with grip so ardent May break me, leaving a deep hurt-dent. I thank God for His truth that orients my faith's stand Yielded to Him, I follow* His directing hand Believing that He holds me within His love so grand Even protecting my hair’s slightest strand Marked by His omnipotent and omniscient brand.
*Matthew 16:24 Then said Jesus unto his disciples, If any man will come after me, let him deny himself, and take up his cross, and follow me. October 9, 2023 3rd place, "Pick-A-Title, Vol 39" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 10/15/2023
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Date: 10/15/2023 10:38:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this superb piece, Beata:-) Way to go!
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Date: 10/9/2023 4:12:00 AM
Wow, this is such a remarkable piece, adorned with so much depth in every line.. I love the pace at which this flows, in a beautifully rhythmic way, really captivating the heart.. You've wonderfully described 'disorientation' and its dimensions while playing with poetic emotions in parallel.. Really loved reading this :)
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