Funchal's Star

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It was in the eighties, a winter day in Funchal, 
the capital of Madeira, when a woman gave birth.
She was an anonymous, struggling woman
sailing the seas of poverty, with three other
children to feed.
At first, she hesitated to have this little baby,
the fourth to come, because the family salary
did not cover more. Her husband, a good man,
who fought in a war in Africa for years, 
and, in a different way, still fighting with himself, 
he was of no help to the family at that time.
Finally, she took a decision as a mum, 
to give light to her new baby.

After that moment, nothing changed for years,
until this baby was a little boy.
Then, he started to show signs of being special.
His intelligence, the way he faced life,
his unique behaviour.
He started thinking about turning a football
into his livelihood to have a better future
for himself and his family, and he certainly did.
As a teenager, his father couldn´t help him much,
but he also liked football, so, that fed the boy´s dreams.
He had a hard time in Lisbon at the beginning 
of his career at the football school. He also suffered
from bullying, something that helped him to increase
his aims even more. 
However, he also had friends 
whom he remembers with great affection.

When he was eighteen, 
he spread his wings to fly higher. He went to England,
where his dream started to come true.
After that, the Funchal´s star 
showed that light that became brighter and brighter.
He was the best football player in the world;
Portugal, England, Spain, Italy, and keep on going.
A little particle coming from a poor Portuguese area
that reached many hearts.
I, personally don´t like football too much, 
but I´m really enchanted about stories 
that have so much to teach us.
And not only that, but this well-known sportsperson
is also a well-known friend of those who need him.
He really jumped and sorted out hard obstacles
through his life, to achieve the goal he set 
for himself as a child.
What a great lesson taught!,
splendid, admirable lady-mum,
outstanding, unbeatable son.
He was born as a shining star,
whose light illuminates many paths to follow,
as a professional sportsman and as a born fighter from humility.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 8/16/2024 2:01:00 AM
Curse the women who abort their children. They could be killing great men. Kudos for you to have such a famous player. You lived well. Hugs.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/17/2024 12:52:00 AM
Hello Victor. Well, sometimes circunstances make people to take those decisions. I suppose it wasn't either easy for her to think clearly. That's my opinion. Luckily, the story of their life finish well, but after many battles on their road. Thank you a lot for your comment. I hope you have a great weekend.!
Date: 8/13/2024 10:44:00 AM
A lovely story Maria, the boy did well… Beryl
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/14/2024 12:55:00 AM
Many thanks dear Beryl for passing by and for your kind comment. Have a lovely day.!
Date: 8/13/2024 10:04:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Funchal's Star" write/story. Life can be hard. Great ending....  Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/14/2024 12:57:00 AM
Dear Paula, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for your lovely words. Have a blessed day.!
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