Notes About The Poem

8/14/2025

A fun Poetry Marathon haiku inspired by Matsuo Basho (1644-1694) and his famous haiku “old pond, a frog jumps in, the sound of water” (as translated into English). I originally published this in my 'Mile 7 Closed and Being Judged' blog post on 8/14/2025. 
 

Each of my Marathon tribute poems is a transformative homage to a literary classic — much like a parody or pastiche. I always credit the original poet and work, and the new poem stands as a creative reinterpretation with its own theme, imagery, and tone. 

I have included my Marathon-themed poetry in my Poetry Marathon blog posts since 2019, usually at the end of the blog posts, but I never posted them to my poetry page. So now I'm taking the time to post them to my poetry page. 

 

Fun Marathon Poetry Inspired By Basho

water puddle 
marathoners running
soaked sneakers squishing
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Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 7:36 PM
Dear Mark, your haiku is fabulous, though I hate when my sneakers get soaked and squishy lol! Oh, such is the life of a poetry marathoner.. must run rain or shine :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Toney Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Dear Susan, I’m glad you liked my fun little Basho-ku. Keep your soggy, squishy running shoes on! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 12:12 PM
such a cute image, Mark. And thanks for my last placement in the marathon
Toney Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 12:53 PM
You are very welcome. Thank you for supporting the Marathon!
George Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:26 PM
This is what happens when running through puddles. Marathoners have no other choice, but run. Very hilarious Haiku, dear Mark.
Toney Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 10:09 PM
Thank you, Valsa. I’m glad you enjoyed it. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 3:57 PM
Love this!
Toney Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 4:10 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Toney Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 3:51 PM
Each of my Marathon tribute poems is a transformative homage to a literary classic — much like a parody or pastiche. I always credit the original poet and work, and the new poem stands as a creative reinterpretation with its own theme, imagery, and tone.
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