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Fun In July

Splash Into Cool water Refreshing time Watermelon treats Bright fireworks burst into Dances under the moonlight Days filled with beach activities Sharing an icecream visit with friends Fun in the sun, precious time with loved ones 7/7/23

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/2/2023 5:38:00 PM

Dear Heidi, your poetic pen captures the fun and festive spirit of July perfectly. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/3/2023 2:20:00 AM

Thank you very much Susan. I am happy to see your comment :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2023 1:33:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning work reminding us of all that goes with the month of July. Way to go. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/1/2023 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Sara. I hope all is well :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/28/2023 5:56:00 PM

A delightful scenic view of July, Heidi! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/29/2023 5:02:00 AM

Thank you very much Kim :)

Marikate Kingston

Date: 7/12/2023 6:33:00 PM

Your poem makes me want summer to last forever, especially in the northeast! It smells, tastes and carries so many delightful images. Ahhh.... I think it was beautiful.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/13/2023 8:07:00 AM

Thank you very much Marikate. I hope you have a fun summer :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/9/2023 6:14:00 AM

Heidi, this piece truly evokes a heavenly sensation through its captivating imagery. July is beautifully interwoven into the narrative, whether it be indulging in refreshing watermelon delicacies, immersing oneself in the mesmerizing display of fireworks, leisurely strolling under the moonlit sky, or jubilantly celebrating by the seaside. It encapsulates the essence of joyous summer experiences shared with cherished companions.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/9/2023 6:36:00 AM

Thank you very much Sotto. I am happy to see your comment and appreciate the kind feedback. I hope you have a nice Sunday :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2023 9:30:00 PM

Sounds like a bit of paradise to me, Heidi! Thanks for the imagery! Happiness and Health, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/9/2023 4:41:00 AM

Thank you and you are welcome Gershon. I hope you have a nice Sunday :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/8/2023 1:29:00 PM

I enjoyed your "Fun in July" write. Have a great weekend...............

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/8/2023 1:55:00 PM

Thank you Paula. I am so happy you enjoyed it. I also hope you have a great weekend :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/8/2023 1:29:00 PM

Beautiful images of July sprinkled throughout--whether enjoying watermelon treats, reveling in fireworks, ambling under moonlight, or rejoicing on beach---fun in the sun with the loved ones. A FAVE for your Etheree, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/8/2023 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy that you liked this and consider it a Fave. There sure are fun things to do in summer. I appreciate your support. It helps me in these difficult times too. I hope your evening goes well :)