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Fun In July

Splash 
Into 
Cool water
Refreshing time
Watermelon treats
Bright fireworks burst into
Dances under the moonlight
Days filled with beach activities
Sharing an icecream visit with friends
Fun in the sun, precious time with loved ones

7/7/23

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Susan Ashley Date: 8/2/2023 5:38:00 PM Dear Heidi, your poetic pen captures the fun and festive spirit of July perfectly. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/3/2023 2:20:00 AM Thank you very much Susan. I am happy to see your comment :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/1/2023 1:33:00 PM Congratulations on this winning work reminding us of all that goes with the month of July. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/1/2023 1:41:00 PM Thank you Sara. I hope all is well :)

Kim Merryman Date: 7/28/2023 5:56:00 PM A delightful scenic view of July, Heidi! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/29/2023 5:02:00 AM Thank you very much Kim :)

Marikate Kingston Date: 7/12/2023 6:33:00 PM Your poem makes me want summer to last forever, especially in the northeast! It smells, tastes and carries so many delightful images. Ahhh.... I think it was beautiful. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/13/2023 8:07:00 AM Thank you very much Marikate. I hope you have a fun summer :)

Sotto Poet Date: 7/9/2023 6:14:00 AM Heidi, this piece truly evokes a heavenly sensation through its captivating imagery. July is beautifully interwoven into the narrative, whether it be indulging in refreshing watermelon delicacies, immersing oneself in the mesmerizing display of fireworks, leisurely strolling under the moonlit sky, or jubilantly celebrating by the seaside. It encapsulates the essence of joyous summer experiences shared with cherished companions. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/9/2023 6:36:00 AM Thank you very much Sotto. I am happy to see your comment and appreciate the kind feedback. I hope you have a nice Sunday :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/8/2023 9:30:00 PM Sounds like a bit of paradise to me, Heidi! Thanks for the imagery! Happiness and Health, Gershon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/9/2023 4:41:00 AM Thank you and you are welcome Gershon. I hope you have a nice Sunday :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/8/2023 1:29:00 PM I enjoyed your "Fun in July" write. Have a great weekend............... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/8/2023 1:55:00 PM Thank you Paula. I am so happy you enjoyed it. I also hope you have a great weekend :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/8/2023 1:29:00 PM Beautiful images of July sprinkled throughout--whether enjoying watermelon treats, reveling in fireworks, ambling under moonlight, or rejoicing on beach---fun in the sun with the loved ones. A FAVE for your Etheree, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/8/2023 1:54:00 PM Thank you Vijay. I am happy that you liked this and consider it a Fave. There sure are fun things to do in summer. I appreciate your support. It helps me in these difficult times too. I hope your evening goes well :)