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Fun In July

Splash 
Into 
Cool water
Refreshing time
Watermelon treats
Bright fireworks burst into
Dances under the moonlight
Days filled with beach activities
Sharing an icecream visit with friends
Fun in the sun, precious time with loved ones

7/7/23

funjulyetheree

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Susan Ashley

August 2, 2023 at 5:38 PM

Dear Heidi, your poetic pen captures the fun and festive spirit of July perfectly. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands

August 3, 2023 at 2:20 AM

Thank you very much Susan. I am happy to see your comment :)

Sara Kendrick

August 1, 2023 at 1:33 PM

Congratulations on this winning work reminding us of all that goes with the month of July. Way to go. Sara

Heidi Sands

August 1, 2023 at 1:41 PM

Thank you Sara. I hope all is well :)

Kim Merryman

July 28, 2023 at 5:56 PM

A delightful scenic view of July, Heidi! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Heidi Sands

July 29, 2023 at 5:02 AM

Thank you very much Kim :)

Marikate Kingston

July 12, 2023 at 6:33 PM

Your poem makes me want summer to last forever, especially in the northeast! It smells, tastes and carries so many delightful images. Ahhh.... I think it was beautiful.

Heidi Sands

July 13, 2023 at 8:07 AM

Thank you very much Marikate. I hope you have a fun summer :)

Sotto Poet

July 9, 2023 at 6:14 AM

Heidi, this piece truly evokes a heavenly sensation through its captivating imagery. July is beautifully interwoven into the narrative, whether it be indulging in refreshing watermelon delicacies, immersing oneself in the mesmerizing display of fireworks, leisurely strolling under the moonlit sky, or jubilantly celebrating by the seaside. It encapsulates the essence of joyous summer experiences shared with cherished companions.

Heidi Sands

July 9, 2023 at 6:36 AM

Thank you very much Sotto. I am happy to see your comment and appreciate the kind feedback. I hope you have a nice Sunday :)

Gershon Wolf

July 8, 2023 at 9:30 PM

Sounds like a bit of paradise to me, Heidi! Thanks for the imagery! Happiness and Health, Gershon

Heidi Sands

July 9, 2023 at 4:41 AM

Thank you and you are welcome Gershon. I hope you have a nice Sunday :)

Vijay Pandit

July 8, 2023 at 1:29 PM

Beautiful images of July sprinkled throughout--whether enjoying watermelon treats, reveling in fireworks, ambling under moonlight, or rejoicing on beach---fun in the sun with the loved ones. A FAVE for your Etheree, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

July 8, 2023 at 1:54 PM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy that you liked this and consider it a Fave. There sure are fun things to do in summer. I appreciate your support. It helps me in these difficult times too. I hope your evening goes well :)