Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Fun At the Fair 2023

on the ride, side to side, smile-smile
up and down, round and round, frown
getting high, side to side, up and down
frown-frown, round and round, peaked
delivered safely
                    to the ground
                                   older brother

entices another ride, run-run, lots of fun

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Deb M September 30, 2023 at 12:08 PM Happy , bright fun poem Kim! Debx Kim Rodrigues September 30, 2023 at 5:00 PM Thank you, Deb!

Joanna Daniel September 29, 2023 at 2:54 AM Go on enjoying your days with your grandchildren, Kim, this is such a super fun write:) Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2023 at 5:25 AM Thank you, Joanna! Kids are so delightful! God bless!

Silent One September 29, 2023 at 2:42 AM Reminds me of my younger days.. these are lovely memories my friend.. Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2023 at 5:25 AM Thank you so much, dear friend!

Victor Buhagiar September 29, 2023 at 2:00 AM Reminds me of how once I dared ride a Russian roller coaster. I almost died on the spot. You described it so well. Hugs xx Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2023 at 5:27 AM To their heart’s delight, they rode. We stayed put. LOL. God bless you. Thanks for sharing your memory!

Bill Baker September 28, 2023 at 11:38 PM Your poem took me right back to fun days at the fair, Kim. Thanks for the trip down memory lane, my friend. Bill Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2023 at 5:27 AM So glad you took the trip!! Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf September 28, 2023 at 7:51 PM I like the way you got my eyes and head spinning with the rhythm and gait of the lines, as well as with the content. Great stuff, Kim! ~ Dizz Hi Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2023 at 5:28 AM LOL! Thank you, dear Gershon!

Paige Hind September 28, 2023 at 4:56 PM Hey, this is pretty cool, love the ride of your poem! Kim Rodrigues September 28, 2023 at 6:07 PM Thank you! You are always so kind and encouraging!