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Fun At the Fair 2023

on the ride, side to side, smile-smile
up and down, round and round, frown
getting high, side to side, up and down
frown-frown, round and round, peaked
delivered safely
                    to the ground
                                   older brother

entices another ride, run-run, lots of fun

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2023

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Deb M Date: 9/30/2023 12:08:00 PM Happy , bright fun poem Kim! Debx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/30/2023 5:00:00 PM Thank you, Deb!

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/29/2023 2:54:00 AM Go on enjoying your days with your grandchildren, Kim, this is such a super fun write:) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/29/2023 5:25:00 AM Thank you, Joanna! Kids are so delightful! God bless!

Silent One Date: 9/29/2023 2:42:00 AM Reminds me of my younger days.. these are lovely memories my friend.. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/29/2023 5:25:00 AM Thank you so much, dear friend!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/29/2023 2:00:00 AM Reminds me of how once I dared ride a Russian roller coaster. I almost died on the spot. You described it so well. Hugs xx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/29/2023 5:27:00 AM To their heart’s delight, they rode. We stayed put. LOL. God bless you. Thanks for sharing your memory!

Bill Baker Date: 9/28/2023 11:38:00 PM Your poem took me right back to fun days at the fair, Kim. Thanks for the trip down memory lane, my friend. Bill Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/29/2023 5:27:00 AM So glad you took the trip!! Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/28/2023 7:51:00 PM I like the way you got my eyes and head spinning with the rhythm and gait of the lines, as well as with the content. Great stuff, Kim! ~ Dizz Hi Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/29/2023 5:28:00 AM LOL! Thank you, dear Gershon!

Paige Hind Date: 9/28/2023 4:56:00 PM Hey, this is pretty cool, love the ride of your poem! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/28/2023 6:07:00 PM Thank you! You are always so kind and encouraging!