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Fun At the Fair 2023

on the ride, side to side, smile-smile up and down, round and round, frown getting high, side to side, up and down frown-frown, round and round, peaked delivered safely to the ground older brother entices another ride, run-run, lots of fun

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Deb M

Date: 9/30/2023 12:08:00 PM

Happy , bright fun poem Kim! Debx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2023 5:00:00 PM

Thank you, Deb!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/29/2023 2:54:00 AM

Go on enjoying your days with your grandchildren, Kim, this is such a super fun write:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2023 5:25:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna! Kids are so delightful! God bless!

Silent One

Date: 9/29/2023 2:42:00 AM

Reminds me of my younger days.. these are lovely memories my friend..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2023 5:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear friend!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 2:00:00 AM

Reminds me of how once I dared ride a Russian roller coaster. I almost died on the spot. You described it so well. Hugs xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2023 5:27:00 AM

To their heart’s delight, they rode. We stayed put. LOL. God bless you. Thanks for sharing your memory!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/28/2023 11:38:00 PM

Your poem took me right back to fun days at the fair, Kim. Thanks for the trip down memory lane, my friend. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2023 5:27:00 AM

So glad you took the trip!! Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/28/2023 7:51:00 PM

I like the way you got my eyes and head spinning with the rhythm and gait of the lines, as well as with the content. Great stuff, Kim! ~ Dizz Hi

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/29/2023 5:28:00 AM

LOL! Thank you, dear Gershon!

Paige Hind

Date: 9/28/2023 4:56:00 PM

Hey, this is pretty cool, love the ride of your poem!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2023 6:07:00 PM

Thank you! You are always so kind and encouraging!