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FUN AT THE BEACH

There's a ripped, good looking guy... gals, don't assume he's quite and shy! Watch how he models: he flexes his muscles... winking at ladies strolling by!

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Date: 5/24/2010 6:57:00 PM
FUNNY WRITE, AND GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:12:00 AM
HI, Andrew, this was a cute little poem. You need to make your lines three and four rhyme with each other, if this is for the contest. And lady should rhyme with guy and shy. But I think the content is darling. LUv ya, andrea
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Date: 5/24/2010 3:36:00 AM
Yes, very romantic and passionate poem
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Date: 5/24/2010 2:46:00 AM
good morning, i find your poem nice and cute, and a very charming,limerick,..p.d.
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