Fun At the Beach

There's a ripped, good looking guy...
gals, don't assume he's quite and shy!
Watch how he models:
he flexes his muscles...
winking at ladies strolling by!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 6:57 PM
FUNNY WRITE, AND GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 7:12 AM
HI, Andrew, this was a cute little poem. You need to make your lines three and four rhyme with each other, if this is for the contest. And lady should rhyme with guy and shy. But I think the content is darling. LUv ya, andrea
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Yes, very romantic and passionate poem
A   Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 2:46 AM
good morning, i find your poem nice and cute, and a very charming,limerick,..p.d.
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