(fulton) Autumns Harvest

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I'm not sure I did this
correctly. I'm going by
the 7 letters make the 
7 lines. And Pastoral as
meaning a country scene
or way of life. I would like
it if someone could give me
their opinion if it's correct.
Thank you
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Reynolds Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 7:08 PM
Congrats on your win, hun = a compassionate write, love Kristin
Winter Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 1:16 PM
Congratulations dear Michael on your win in Brian's contest! One of my favorites! Love, Shar
Mckenzie Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 10:06 AM
Michael well done ,Congratulations on your win in the Fulton contest! Laura :)
Richards Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 8:57 AM
This poem caught me right from the beginning with it's unique subject! Congratulations, Michael..this was a winner! ~ Carrie
Heck Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 8:29 AM
Michael - Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. The message in this fulton is superb! Peace always, John
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October 17, 2008 at 8:23 AM
Hi Michael, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulation on being one of the winners in Brian's Fulton contest to my other comment. This poem is well-written and deserving of the honor. Thank you for your ongoing support. Blessings to you. Karen
Frost Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 9:46 PM
Awsome Words Slam Dunk
George   Avatar
October 6, 2008 at 2:18 PM
AWESOME! Perfect form with vivid pictures and universal meaning. also, thank you so much for all your comments on my writing, Michael. Love, lainie
Strand Avatar
October 5, 2008 at 8:17 AM
Hi Michael, I conceived the fulton with a pastoral /nature theme as a picture poem, in tribute to the artist of that name,but poetry form is a living form and I see no objection to it use with other themes ,as the inspiration leads so to say! Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words on my postings.
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October 4, 2008 at 11:09 AM
Good depth in this poem--you did it in just seven words. Love the message. The only thing I'm not sure about is the omission of the apostrophe in Autumns. Maybe in this short format it is unnecessary. Good job with this one. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Karen
Buys Avatar
October 3, 2008 at 3:35 PM
Very clever and well written. Love Heidie
White Avatar
October 3, 2008 at 3:29 PM
hi Michael, I like this write, although different, different still can be good, nice write take care D-ncye
Kelly Avatar
October 2, 2008 at 9:46 AM
I like this new format , and YES , Michael , you have a 1st class presentation ... Well done...
Foster Avatar
October 2, 2008 at 8:09 AM
It makes perfect sense to me Michael, I'm just trying out the technique myself :-) I love the imagery of this poem... Good luck with the contest my friend. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Chamma Avatar
October 2, 2008 at 6:44 AM
Thank you for your kind words Michael..See..."We are The Generation" was written to capture the irresponsibility mostly all people of this Generation carry...The superficiality, the interest in Gossip, hideous music and the many things called nonsense...I have written this based on my judgement of the ones that surround me and on a little research on the majority all over the world...It's a shame really..how value now lies not in what IS valuable...
Chamma Avatar
October 2, 2008 at 6:44 AM
I live in the United Arab Emirates (The famous Dubai)..and this country joins sooo many different nationalities and races.. which was enough for me to judge
Chamma Avatar
October 2, 2008 at 6:27 AM
A great try with a new form..Thank you for sharing Mike...Always... Farah
Winter Avatar
October 2, 2008 at 4:38 AM
Wow! You did an awesome job with this form! You are seriously on a roll! Totally excellent! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
October 1, 2008 at 11:59 PM
Your'e on the ball Michael.They can be 4 lines of 4 four letters or 5 of 5 ,6 of 6 ,7 of 7 (like your)and so forth with a nature/pastoral theme.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings
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