Fulton-Eruptions

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Fathima Dawood

Date: 10/14/2008 1:39:00 AM

I like it, I wanted to look up the poem and try to create a shape poem for your contest, but I don't really know if I could do this. Well done Peace Fasthima

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/13/2008 7:05:00 AM

I know what it is you write of. Excellent. Although this doesn't make it sound very appetizing I am still hungry from your last poem. : ) Aside from that, makes me long to walk through a forest, so rich and deep in nature's mystery. Love, Shar

Michael Torres

Date: 10/13/2008 1:58:00 AM

..Raking leaves..

Michael Torres

Date: 10/13/2008 1:57:00 AM

You like these types of poems Brian and you have a special talent to find those crucial words that fit in just right. Another excellent write. It brings memories to me when I was a boy racking leaves. I earned two dollars to do a shole yard. It was a lot of money back then 1968. Then I go to the store and get my cheeses and soda those were great innocent days no worries or heartfelt situations. blesings Michael

Not Anymore

Date: 10/13/2008 1:37:00 AM

It doesn't look like eruption. It looks like a square. It is fun saying those three times fast though.