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Heavy rainfall fully emptied the streets, A thunderclap shattered the loud silence, Frightened animals made some quiet noise, Smiling cries from the sky mocked the city, Farm crops sadly rejoiced to the warm cold. That day, rain was their friendly enemy. The next day, dried wetness was everywhere. Light shadows of the sunshine were laid bare, Skin pores poured out stored water from within. Previous rainfall drought dried out the skin. Many beg the sky to release more rains, Cold waves of heat from yesterday just fled. That long-lost comfort can't just be so brief. The dried tears of the sky just have to stop.

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Date: 12/4/2024 10:59:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge, Maclawrence. Your poem was randomly chosen to feature in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. I love your personification of the sky and farm crops — "The smiling cries from the sky mocked the city / Farm crops sadly rejoiced to the warm cold."
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