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Fully Booked Part 2

In sentient shades of silence The heart endures from tyrants Love lives lachrymosely long My heart shows its prong. June.22.2016 PART 2, FULLY BOOKED - Poetry Contest By nette onclaud ~compose ONE dodoitsu: 7, 7, 7,5 syl count: 4 lines *The Heart Is A Lonely Hunter ( Carson Mc Culler)

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2016 10:18:00 AM

WW, emotive and filled with sharp longing... thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats!..huggs

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/26/2016 10:49:00 PM

Thank you nette...it was a pleasure my friend...god bless...^WW^...and a big hug to you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2016 9:36:00 AM

Returning to say Big congrats!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/26/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thank you dear friend...and a congrats to you to...a job well done...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2016 10:10:00 AM

I love how you did yours based on that novel title. I love that novel too!!!(though I only saw its movie version)

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/25/2016 10:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea...unfortunately I never read much(books)...only poetry...maybe I should start with this novel...is a book of poetry considered a book? lol...god bless...^WW^