Winged Warrior Poet Dodoitsu

Fully Booked Part 2

In sentient shades of silence
The heart endures from tyrants
Love lives lachrymosely long
My heart shows its prong.


June.22.2016
PART 2, FULLY BOOKED - Poetry Contest
By nette onclaud

~compose ONE dodoitsu: 7, 7, 7,5 syl count: 4 lines
*The Heart Is A Lonely Hunter ( Carson Mc Culler)

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Nette Onclaud June 26, 2016 at 10:18 AM WW, emotive and filled with sharp longing... thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats!..huggs Winged Warrior June 26, 2016 at 10:49 PM Thank you nette...it was a pleasure my friend...god bless...^WW^...and a big hug to you...

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2016 at 9:36 AM Returning to say Big congrats!! Winged Warrior June 26, 2016 at 9:55 AM Thank you dear friend...and a congrats to you to...a job well done...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2016 at 10:10 AM I love how you did yours based on that novel title. I love that novel too!!!(though I only saw its movie version) Winged Warrior June 25, 2016 at 10:30 AM Thank you so much Andrea...unfortunately I never read much(books)...only poetry...maybe I should start with this novel...is a book of poetry considered a book? lol...god bless...^WW^