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Fully Booked 2

As your heartbeat echoes mine
we dance to the ocean tune
in slow anticipation.
Tender is the night. 

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23 rd June 2016

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Eve Roper

June 24, 2016 at 5:45 PM

very nice romantic write, Paul, good luck in the contest. Thank you so much for reading my poems. Hugs

Paul Callus

June 25, 2016 at 4:26 AM

Good morning, Eve. Thank you for reading and liking this short poem. I was away for a few days due to health reasons; now playing catching up:) hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

June 24, 2016 at 4:51 PM

Very lovely and so romantically expressed, Paul. Best wishes for the contest -- this should do well! Sandra

Paul Callus

June 25, 2016 at 4:24 AM

Thank you for the positive comments, Sandra. Luck was not on my side....the contest filled up too quickly...or perhaps I was too slow:) Regards // paul