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Full Moon Rising

Mars was visible in bright daylight
Not hidden and out of might
Full moon rising in plain sight
My vision doomed, across the room 
No underwear covering this moon
Peeking across and dominating
In orbit mars will appear
I can't help but leer at the poor dear




Inspried by a burning image I saw today and Sara Kendrick's poem Mars, I read today.

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James Fraser

Date: 3/30/2010 12:37:00 PM

Kool one Doris, made me chuckle >> James

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/27/2010 10:34:00 PM

Was it the blue moon? This poem throws up all sorts of pictures. :)...good one ..Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2010 12:12:00 PM

That was a funny thought, Doris, leering at the moon wearing no underwear. Never thought of THAT one. haha. Now I will have to go see Sara's poem that inspired it! Oh, and I just thought of the play on words: He was mooning you!! LUv, Andrea

Brian Strand

Date: 3/27/2010 12:28:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Doris.Rgds Brian

David Byrne

Date: 3/26/2010 11:35:00 PM

Interesting parallel.................

John Freeman

Date: 3/26/2010 7:51:00 PM

Oh bless you girl, your title, reminds me of one of my favorite songs "Bad Moon Rising" Smile. Thanks for supporting my blog. Agape, Moses

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2010 6:17:00 PM

this is a pondering write ,nice and thanks

Gareth James

Date: 3/26/2010 4:21:00 PM

Doris, i read it several times to try and get the vision of looking up someones skirt, out of my head!!!......No, it's still there! Damn imagination!! Naughty boy! I'll be back in 5....!! JOKE!!!! ....NO NEW BLOGS.... PLEASE!!! :) Well written dorris, clever use of words