Full Moon Rising

Mars was visible in bright daylight
Not hidden and out of might
Full moon rising in plain sight
My vision doomed, across the room 
No underwear covering this moon
Peeking across and dominating
In orbit mars will appear
I can't help but leer at the poor dear




Inspried by a burning image I saw today and Sara Kendrick's poem Mars, I read today.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Kool one Doris, made me chuckle >> James
Foster Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 10:34 PM
Was it the blue moon? This poem throws up all sorts of pictures. :)...good one ..Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 12:12 PM
That was a funny thought, Doris, leering at the moon wearing no underwear. Never thought of THAT one. haha. Now I will have to go see Sara's poem that inspired it! Oh, and I just thought of the play on words: He was mooning you!! LUv, Andrea
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March 27, 2010 at 12:28 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Doris.Rgds Brian
Byrne Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 11:35 PM
Interesting parallel.................
Freeman Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Oh bless you girl, your title, reminds me of one of my favorite songs "Bad Moon Rising" Smile. Thanks for supporting my blog. Agape, Moses
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March 26, 2010 at 6:17 PM
this is a pondering write ,nice and thanks
James Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 4:21 PM
Doris, i read it several times to try and get the vision of looking up someones skirt, out of my head!!!......No, it's still there! Damn imagination!! Naughty boy! I'll be back in 5....!! JOKE!!!! ....NO NEW BLOGS.... PLEASE!!! :) Well written dorris, clever use of words
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March 26, 2010 at 1:26 PM
I hope that you are not talking about what I think if so has it gotten that bad....Mom
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