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I went on a blind date on the tenth of June He was handsome, his looks made me swoon We drank champagne at the swanky ‘Dubloon’ Fortunately, he was a multi millionaire tycoon! He escorted me outside so that we could spoon Too much champers turned him into a buffoon His laddish behaviour it was most inopportune... He dropped his trousers - I could see his full moon! I was moonstruck - he acted like stupid baboon My cab pulled up, ‘twas not a moment too soon! Moon Contest Sponsored by Kevin Shaw 6/12/18

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2018 5:06:00 PM

Hahaha..I loved reading this from the beginning up till the end.. Ha..No wonder you were moonstruck :)

Al Juman

Date: 6/16/2018 11:38:00 PM

Va-Va-Va just happy its not me Excellent girl

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2018 12:23:00 PM

Thanks Al:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2018 10:40:00 PM

These moments don't happen often, maybe once in a blue moon. ~ Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2018 1:41:00 AM

ha ha ha it would be blue if it was a cold wintery night lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/13/2018 6:12:00 PM

Lol, a baboon tycoon who mooned...thank God for the swift arrival of the cab none too soon! Love the humor and good luck in the contest Jan!~Che :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2018 6:40:00 PM

cheers Che:-) just a fun poem i doubt very much if it will place as its rather off topic lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/13/2018 3:27:00 PM

I would have mooned him

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2018 3:36:00 PM

ha ha ha ... thankfully its pure fiction Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/13/2018 2:12:00 AM

Haha, you got out of there in the nick of time , sounds like he made a luna-tick of himself . Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2018 8:06:00 AM

lovely word play Tom!:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/12/2018 9:58:00 PM

O Jan, This is awesome. Superbly done.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2018 8:06:00 AM

Just a fun poem I doubt it will place:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 6/12/2018 8:08:00 PM

I love it Jan. Glad I have not had the pleasure. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/13/2018 8:05:00 AM

Nor me Sian:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet

Date: 6/12/2018 7:31:00 PM

LOL...leave it to you to tweek the "moon"! Love it! GL in the contest, Jan.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/12/2018 6:39:00 PM

you are too funny, jan! this is hilarious and the ending is perfect...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2018 6:41:00 PM

I doubt it will place Ilene but I just thought I would have fun:-) pure fiction by the way but in my youth I did have a friend who used to moon lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lyric Man

Date: 6/12/2018 6:30:00 PM

Ummm.. I'm not yet a millionaire Jan ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2018 6:33:00 PM

lol but you should be with your awesome lyrics Chance - you just need to get them published and that is not a dream it could be reality:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2018 5:32:00 PM

LOL I would have started running the moment he revealed his "full moon." Very funny, Jan. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2018 5:36:00 PM

lol Carolyn, thankfully its a pure fiction poem:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2018 5:31:00 PM

way to go with the light heartedness for this one. I see this is filling SO quickly. Oh my gosh I have to hurry and think something up, catch up here AND make dinner. YIKES.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2018 5:35:00 PM

I just went for some fun Andrea, i doubt very much it will place:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/12/2018 3:52:00 PM

LOL Funny Jan! Great one :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2018 3:57:00 PM

Thanks Heidi it is somewhat off topic so I doubt it will place but I had fun lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2018 3:04:00 PM

- Bubbles, champagne and moon ... me too :)) - but, still completely different ... I love your suggestion, Jan :) ... - Good luck in contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2018 3:52:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise he asked for a bit of humour but I doubt this is what he meant lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/12/2018 2:57:00 PM

Giggles! Not buying that love ;) xomo!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2018 3:51:00 PM

lol Mo I doubt it will place but hey ho its fun and that is so lacking on here at times:-) hugs Jan xx