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Full Moon Rising

I went on a blind date on the tenth of June
He was handsome, his looks made me swoon
We drank champagne at the swanky ‘Dubloon’
Fortunately, he was a multi millionaire tycoon!

He escorted me outside so that we could spoon
Too much champers turned him into a buffoon
His laddish behaviour it was most inopportune...
He dropped his trousers  - I could see his full moon!

I was moonstruck - he acted like stupid baboon
My cab pulled up, ‘twas not a moment too soon!

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6/12/18

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Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/10/2018 5:06:00 PM Hahaha..I loved reading this from the beginning up till the end.. Ha..No wonder you were moonstruck :) Login to Reply

Al Juman Date: 6/16/2018 11:38:00 PM Va-Va-Va just happy its not me Excellent girl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/17/2018 12:23:00 PM Thanks Al:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/14/2018 10:40:00 PM These moments don't happen often, maybe once in a blue moon. ~ Gershon Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/15/2018 1:41:00 AM ha ha ha it would be blue if it was a cold wintery night lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 6/13/2018 6:12:00 PM Lol, a baboon tycoon who mooned...thank God for the swift arrival of the cab none too soon! Love the humor and good luck in the contest Jan!~Che :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/13/2018 6:40:00 PM cheers Che:-) just a fun poem i doubt very much if it will place as its rather off topic lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 6/13/2018 3:27:00 PM I would have mooned him Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/13/2018 3:36:00 PM ha ha ha ... thankfully its pure fiction Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/13/2018 2:12:00 AM Haha, you got out of there in the nick of time , sounds like he made a luna-tick of himself . Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/13/2018 8:06:00 AM lovely word play Tom!:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier Date: 6/12/2018 9:58:00 PM O Jan, This is awesome. Superbly done. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/13/2018 8:06:00 AM Just a fun poem I doubt it will place:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 6/12/2018 8:08:00 PM I love it Jan. Glad I have not had the pleasure. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/13/2018 8:05:00 AM Nor me Sian:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet Date: 6/12/2018 7:31:00 PM LOL...leave it to you to tweek the "moon"! Love it! GL in the contest, Jan. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 6/12/2018 6:39:00 PM you are too funny, jan! this is hilarious and the ending is perfect... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2018 6:41:00 PM I doubt it will place Ilene but I just thought I would have fun:-) pure fiction by the way but in my youth I did have a friend who used to moon lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lyric Man Date: 6/12/2018 6:30:00 PM Ummm.. I'm not yet a millionaire Jan ;) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2018 6:33:00 PM lol but you should be with your awesome lyrics Chance - you just need to get them published and that is not a dream it could be reality:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/12/2018 5:32:00 PM LOL I would have started running the moment he revealed his "full moon." Very funny, Jan. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2018 5:36:00 PM lol Carolyn, thankfully its a pure fiction poem:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/12/2018 5:31:00 PM way to go with the light heartedness for this one. I see this is filling SO quickly. Oh my gosh I have to hurry and think something up, catch up here AND make dinner. YIKES. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2018 5:35:00 PM I just went for some fun Andrea, i doubt very much it will place:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands Date: 6/12/2018 3:52:00 PM LOL Funny Jan! Great one :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2018 3:57:00 PM Thanks Heidi it is somewhat off topic so I doubt it will place but I had fun lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2018 3:04:00 PM - Bubbles, champagne and moon ... me too :)) - but, still completely different ... I love your suggestion, Jan :) ... - Good luck in contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2018 3:52:00 PM Thanks Anne-Lise he asked for a bit of humour but I doubt this is what he meant lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/12/2018 2:57:00 PM Giggles! Not buying that love ;) xomo! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/12/2018 3:51:00 PM lol Mo I doubt it will place but hey ho its fun and that is so lacking on here at times:-) hugs Jan xx