Jan Allison Poet Monorhyme

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Full Moon Rising

I went on a blind date on the tenth of June
He was handsome, his looks made me swoon
We drank champagne at the swanky ‘Dubloon’
Fortunately, he was a multi millionaire tycoon!

He escorted me outside so that we could spoon
Too much champers turned him into a buffoon
His laddish behaviour it was most inopportune...
He dropped his trousers  - I could see his full moon!

I was moonstruck - he acted like stupid baboon
My cab pulled up, ‘twas not a moment too soon!

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6/12/18

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Charmaine Chircop September 10, 2018 at 5:06 PM Hahaha..I loved reading this from the beginning up till the end.. Ha..No wonder you were moonstruck :)

Al Juman June 16, 2018 at 11:38 PM Va-Va-Va just happy its not me Excellent girl Jan Allison June 17, 2018 at 12:23 PM Thanks Al:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf June 14, 2018 at 10:40 PM These moments don't happen often, maybe once in a blue moon. ~ Gershon Jan Allison June 15, 2018 at 1:41 AM ha ha ha it would be blue if it was a cold wintery night lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman June 13, 2018 at 6:12 PM Lol, a baboon tycoon who mooned...thank God for the swift arrival of the cab none too soon! Love the humor and good luck in the contest Jan!~Che :) Jan Allison June 13, 2018 at 6:40 PM cheers Che:-) just a fun poem i doubt very much if it will place as its rather off topic lol:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith June 13, 2018 at 3:27 PM I would have mooned him Jan Allison June 13, 2018 at 3:36 PM ha ha ha ... thankfully its pure fiction Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham June 13, 2018 at 2:12 AM Haha, you got out of there in the nick of time , sounds like he made a luna-tick of himself . Tom Jan Allison June 13, 2018 at 8:06 AM lovely word play Tom!:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier June 12, 2018 at 9:58 PM O Jan, This is awesome. Superbly done. Jan Allison June 13, 2018 at 8:06 AM Just a fun poem I doubt it will place:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi June 12, 2018 at 8:08 PM I love it Jan. Glad I have not had the pleasure. Good luck in the contest. Jan Allison June 13, 2018 at 8:05 AM Nor me Sian:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet June 12, 2018 at 7:31 PM LOL...leave it to you to tweek the "moon"! Love it! GL in the contest, Jan.

Ilene Bauer June 12, 2018 at 6:39 PM you are too funny, jan! this is hilarious and the ending is perfect... Jan Allison June 12, 2018 at 6:41 PM I doubt it will place Ilene but I just thought I would have fun:-) pure fiction by the way but in my youth I did have a friend who used to moon lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lyric Man June 12, 2018 at 6:30 PM Ummm.. I'm not yet a millionaire Jan ;) Jan Allison June 12, 2018 at 6:33 PM lol but you should be with your awesome lyrics Chance - you just need to get them published and that is not a dream it could be reality:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire June 12, 2018 at 5:32 PM LOL I would have started running the moment he revealed his "full moon." Very funny, Jan. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn Jan Allison June 12, 2018 at 5:36 PM lol Carolyn, thankfully its a pure fiction poem:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2018 at 5:31 PM way to go with the light heartedness for this one. I see this is filling SO quickly. Oh my gosh I have to hurry and think something up, catch up here AND make dinner. YIKES. Jan Allison June 12, 2018 at 5:35 PM I just went for some fun Andrea, i doubt very much it will place:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands June 12, 2018 at 3:52 PM LOL Funny Jan! Great one :) Jan Allison June 12, 2018 at 3:57 PM Thanks Heidi it is somewhat off topic so I doubt it will place but I had fun lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2018 at 3:04 PM - Bubbles, champagne and moon ... me too :)) - but, still completely different ... I love your suggestion, Jan :) ... - Good luck in contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison June 12, 2018 at 3:52 PM Thanks Anne-Lise he asked for a bit of humour but I doubt this is what he meant lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 12, 2018 at 2:57 PM Giggles! Not buying that love ;) xomo! Jan Allison June 12, 2018 at 3:51 PM lol Mo I doubt it will place but hey ho its fun and that is so lacking on here at times:-) hugs Jan xx